Wow. Epic... yeah. I've seen this part; it's... beyond words. This was excellent. I liked how you used the exact lines from the ep.

loved how you went in depth with what vala was thinking. as much as i know that they care about each other Daniel was overly harsh. i think i would have almost liked it better if she had stormed off but im such a fan of vala and daniel. that i will take what i can get. i repeat i loved what you did with exploring all of the undercurrents of the conversation. please write more.

Great story! I love it!

Well, the first thing I'll say is...waoh. I waited for en French whoo would do this, and because I don't thik I could. (I'm French, as you guessed). So, the second thing I'll say is a question. May I translate this ? May I translate your fic from English to French ? I hope you'll allow me to do it. I really do. And sorry for my bad english.

So excellent - moving and lovely. I really enjoyed that.

Usually I don't like fics that just repeat scenes from shows, because they tend not to have a lot of depth. This was done extraordinarily well though, with the dialogue we'd already seen acting as a backdrop to the wonderful internal struggles you describe Vala going through. The way you started and ended on the same note tied the fic up really nicely, and you've got a great talent for storytelling, a wonderful "voice", as my English teachers always called it.

I found this scene to be one of the most poignant I'd seen in SG-1 eps in a long time, and I'm really glad that you pulled off a beautiful fic tributing it.

Um... on the note of constructive criticism ('cause I feel like a bad reviewer if I don't give any helpful improvement hints)... there's not really much I can say: just a few typos you could fix on a re-read, like "It begins to hurts."

Anyway, really nice job.

~YnK

Hey, Isa - can't be bothered logging in. Anyway, I love this!

The section: "She'll let him see. This will be ..." is just exactly dead on the tone of the look she gives him at that point. And the fact that the apology is implicit is just *dies*

Been waiting patiently (or not so) for someone to write this *grin*

kay x

Wonderfully done. Loved the way you voiced Vala's thoughts and emotions during that scene.

beautifully done.

Great Job Isa loved how you got into Vala's head now you need to do it from Daniel's head. I thought it was in character and very moving.