AWESOME

one word DAMN! that is an amazing story, long but amazing. I'm telling you this should be the story for advent children.

One word . . . WOW that was one of the best fics I have EVER read I stayed up all night reading it i started at about 2:00 in the morning and just finished now with it being 7:30 I only had a couple of breaks in between but I have to say that I loved everything about your fic it was just so amazing keep up the good work and if you ever feel like getting around to it i was wondering if you could read and review my story A Ninja's Solace I have only one chapter so far but I'm working on putting more chapters in soon thanks

i just finished reading it and it was great. sad at parts, but great. by the way, i love the squall joke in the first chapter

I must say Madame Tifa, this is one of the best examples of fan literature that i have ever seen. (and that hasnt been writen by me) Simply excellent

Sorry bout that happy happy elf comment ... *snort* it was quite ingenious though wouldn't ya say? I thought it was anyways! Hahahahahahaha sorry dude I mean Tifa G. Really! Okay well see ya! And don't worry okay? Wahoo! I actually really like your story! I'm gonna read it all when I get a chance! Till then!

Luv Lilly

Told ya I'd review didn't I? And I did so there, yeah your story is pretty good ... Okay actually I gotta admit it's a good idea really. But I thought that Conlan dude was a chick to start with, I suppose it's just an assumption nothing more, nothing less but it still threw me a little, no biggy though ... uh ... what else can I say? My God ... I don't know ... oh how about this ... if Ash is a Mary Sue then Conlan is a happy happy elf ... yeah i know it doesn't have the same ring but I think you get the picture ... if you think that Ash is perfect then why don't you look at your own character? He is quite perfect himself ... just a thought that's all ... okay well e mail me if ya want ... oh and I don't flame I only help ... maybe you should do the same it doesn't make anyone think your cool especially when you pick on people like charlotte who have only just started

"humor helped me get through situation that scared me shitless" Conlan

One of the funniest remarks in the story, good writing! I'm looking forward to seeing more of your work. Bye.

I can summerize this story in one word: (all words that mean ausome!) Did you say you were making a sequle to this?

Awsome see ya.

So far so good. You really do go into alot of detail which is refreshing for most most fanfics. Good job _

except for some grammar mistakes, the story was good.

Wow, emotional! I like how you describe Tifa. eally powerful charactor. *gives thumbs up*

U can't leave it like this! *on her knees and begging* plez continue. This was one of the best storys i ever read.

Well, I'm a genius! I was reading this chapter over again and went... "Oh my God, she's going to leave it like that!"

Yeah, I'm not the brightest crayon in the box now am I? Anyways, ignore my last (rabid) review... but I smell a sequel! Great writing as usual! Hope to see more work from you very soon!

Ja! .