great start keep writing please

meh its okay. i'll stay in touch though to se what else happens. ]

I think you need a bit touching up on your skills, though. Not very tactful the way you skipped from subject to subject, and the way you described things. Oh well, you're obviously a first-timer. Hey, you'll get better. Maybe. Hopefully. lol.

omg jess! I love it. Thanks god Ron is out of the picture. I love your narrative on Hermione and everything.

Please update soon!