Reviews for When You're Not Looking
BlueBloodsSVUOrder chapter 20 . 1/29
:) :) ;) ;)
Love Noelle and Don.
Purplestan chapter 13 . 8/11/2018
Mommy and Daddy? How old is she 5?
Purplestan chapter 8 . 8/10/2018
Can you not put line breaks in this when you change scene as it's really confusing.
Tris chapter 148 . 6/7/2018
Okay, this is the most realistic relationship I have ever read, the main reason why this fanfiction will always remain close to my heart. Gawd, i feel so mushy. XD Thank you for a wonderful story!
bjq chapter 148 . 2/27/2018
love it. Hope theres a sewquel about Katie all growed up
Isabella1707 chapter 1 . 7/1/2012
:D
yaba chapter 6 . 4/28/2011
Whoa what an intense storyline for Noelle but now the test makes sense now. Lindsay and Noelle seem to be bonding already. I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Yana
yaba chapter 5 . 4/28/2011
Uh and the plot thickens. I'm curious to see what Noelle is holding back. You made it just the right amount of vague and I'm excited for more. Flack is really stepping up and it's lovely to read that :)

Yana
yaba chapter 4 . 4/28/2011
*grin* This was cute without being cheesy! I like how attentive Flack is when it comes to Noelle and how he understands her damands as a mother. I really enjoyed this :)

Yana
yaba chapter 3 . 4/28/2011
This was another really cute chapter. I like how despite the growing chemistry between them, Noelle and Flack are keeping their distance. I can see why she would be vigilant and Flack understanding where she's coming from is really respecful and nice. Great Job

Yana
yaba chapter 2 . 4/28/2011
That ending made me snicker, I'll admit. It was an overall really surprising chapter. I always think in long stories like this that babies make an appearance later but I love the back story you created for Noelle. She seems like she's been through a lot and it gives her character. I want to adopt some day myself so this was a really inspring revelation. Keep it up :)

Yana

P.S. Yup, I may try to leave a review for every single chapter :)
yaba chapter 1 . 4/28/2011
Oh this is so exciting! I love how you set up their first meeting. It is SO hard to find good Flack/OFC stories out there and I'm seriously excited to read such a long one. Looking forward to it :)

Yana
iheartcsinewyork chapter 148 . 10/17/2010
Okay, I'm super sad that this is ending, but what a perfect ending indeed. Is it wrong of me to hold on hope to a sequel? No pressure, just know it would be very well received!

You ended this fantastically, I honestly didn't see Tony joining USNA at all. That was a very good, unexpected, little twist.

Thank you for writing this, it is one of my favorite CSI: NY fics. I'm sure I'll be rereading it again at some point. You do fantastic work and I loved every single chapter!

Best of Luck!
saturn567 chapter 148 . 10/17/2010
lovely job! all the best to you in your endevors!
Dizzy-Dreamer chapter 148 . 10/16/2010
I'm not really a regular reviewer (I never have anything substantial to say!) but I have to say something now it's all over. I have loved every single chapter of this story! I'm definitely looking forward to reading whatever you write next, if you choose to share it, and I'm definitely holding out hope for that sequel...!
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