| Reviews for pretence |
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Guest chapter 1 . 8/3 This story deserves a sequel! It's looking so incomplete, sad, not fulfilled and gas so much things said unsaid. It's so important for this story to have an end. U_U |
bogusbabe chapter 1 . 8/25/2019 I think the world deserves this story to continue... It's been 10 years since you asked yourself "what your 2007 self was thinking..." and 12 years since you actually wrote the story... Have you figured it out yet? |
Guest chapter 1 . 1/13/2019 I loved it. |
GoatVille chapter 1 . 7/15/2018 Omg girl! This shit is good consider me hooked! Why are you playing games with my feels right now though? Sasuke-obviously faking being under that potion lmfaooo and Hinata not knowing? No, nah I need this rectified ! This concept is so cute tho? Pining Hinata is always a go for me, always. and your writing is amazing. The intro was so eloquent, and the plot is so interesting! This is good stuff I hope your intentions with the story get back to you I would love to see more! |
Guest chapter 1 . 6/10/2018 I enjoyed your disclaimer note as well as author note at the end more. It’s sad that you forgot what to do or where to head with this story coz this is a wonderful story. All I can do is wish that you have a dream in which you remember all you had imagined about this story and continue it. I feel this is far more achievable than time machine ne? |
LaughingWombat chapter 1 . 6/7/2018 Experiment? Unless the love potion wasn't real. Then it was likely to devastate Sasuke in hopes he would join a gang? idk. |
Guest chapter 1 . 3/22/2018 PLEASE UPDATE THIS |
Kichisaburo chapter 1 . 12/14/2017 Omg please update this! Love ittt |
LoveInTheMask chapter 1 . 12/11/2017 I have loved this story when it was published ten years ago. As an adult, it still tugs at my heartstrings. I will never stop loving it. I really really hope that you continue this story. Or find the way you want to end it. I'm just so glad you decided to share it in the first place. Thank you 3 3 |
Saamon-sama chapter 1 . 12/11/2017 Following on the off-chance that you do continue this... I think this is adorable and that your 2007 self was brilliant in making a supportive and not abusive Sakura! |
van apel chapter 1 . 12/7/2017 Thank thank you, idk what to say, i just really wnat you ro continue this story till the last cjapter, please please please :D Welcome baaack Thank you :D |
Rroxz chapter 1 . 12/7/2017 I'd really like to see this complete one day but I'm happy there is finally more to it regardless thanks for writing what you have best wishes to you :) |
readchangelive chapter 1 . 6/15/2017 looking for the rest aka 9 parts left to this :) till then, thank you for writing this! it's an interesting start heh |
AugustMoon259 chapter 1 . 12/5/2015 ...Damn...It's always "love at first sight"... |
embernight9 chapter 1 . 6/15/2015 Oh my gosh that was too funny, poor Hinata. This seems like it's to a good start, it's really cute. Please continue |