Thanks, that was cute in a sad way.

aw man, it's been too many years since i last played IX. i used to have two copies but now i have none. what the hell's with that? anyways, i'm beginning to miss it and the overwhelming innocence of the story. plus, beatrix was just too frickin' cool.

...back at the farm...

great story as usual. the gray mixed it with brilliant hues of nostalgia to break one's heart. i especially love the small part where she describes her bow falling into her eyes. that was most adorable. also, i loved how in tuned with eiko's character you are. in fact you're rather in tuned with every character that i've read...cool beans for you!

so, once again exceptional work and each story i read only makes me a bigger fan!

And who says oneshots have to be uber-long to be considered fantastic?

I'm pleased to find how well you kept Vivi and Eiko loyal to their characters; especially on their believable actions, touching thoughts, and excellent dialogue.

By and by, the story itself was very well-written, especially since you managed to pull the tricky feat of keeping the plot-line in a smooth and steady pace with just two characters, as opposed to throwing in the entire party to get things moving! ;)