It read like you planned to write more, but I enjoyed reading what you wrote. Nicely done.

I liked it. Thanks for posting it.

Amazing! Loved it!

Really good! I enjoyed reading it.

Loved it! Great job!

I likes this ! Kickass job ! (:

This pleases me. Whump is my ambrosia. Tu es tres bien, which doesn't hurt either.

I especially like how you drew it out. Well, Shawn probably doesn't, mais je fais.

Now, I am proceeding to your profile page voir if you have any more of these bijoux.

(S'il vous plait fait)

Continuez d'ecrire, ma amie.

Personally, I love Shawn whump so the hospital bit was good

Cute! I loved it!

aww that was good ;)

Such an amazing story! You are great at imagery!

I liked the whole thing! Even the hospital parts... Especially the apocalypse thing. I think you should continue it with the recovery, maybe with Jules putting the chapstick on him. ;-D

I loved this story! very exciting. great job! ]

Great story! I liked the hospital parts, and you did a great job speaking on fire. I just wish we could have heard what Jules, the Chief, and Lassiter had to say:)

Aw, love it! Needs more! Write a Lassie scene!