Yami No Tenshi: AWWWWWW! *passes out from the sweetness and sexyness from the story*
Hikari No Tenshi: and here we go again *poke her yami*

Good story have you thought of doing a sequel PLEASE XD

This was great to read thank you! Loved Ryou in this :)

Dude that was fuckin awesome! I loved the last bit, it was my fav! I love PDA, excessively.

~ash

Yes. That is all I have to say. Yes. This story really made me happy, like bubbly in the stomach happy. I'm glad I found it, its well written, entertaining, and compared to all the fanfiction I've read, original. I'd love to see more of this Yami and Yugi's relationship! Meaning: Please don't let this be a one-shot *cries* lol anyways. Yes.

Enjoyed the story, however you categorized it wrong. It's not Yami Marik and Yugi, poor insane yami wasn't even mentioned

(squeals loudly)

I love it!

That ending is great!

This is one of the best one shots i've seen!

This was taken from Sensitive Pornograph, wasn't it?

um i think this is in the rong catagory thingy, i did not see anything about marik in there i would go back and change it to yami yugi (also know as yami y. or atem or yami or other yugi or dark... u get the point) sorry if im being rude

Very interesting! XD I enjoyed the fic a lot. I'd say my favorite part is when Ryou was telling Yugi Bakura was no doubt just behind the bathroom door. It made me laugh at the odd cutenees.

And the characterzation was also really good. I enjoyed reading about Yami and Yugi and just their personalities and how different and yet alike they were. Something that I think truly made your fic perfectly wonderful.

Thank you for writing something so... Amazing! :)

TL

HOLY CRAP! That was sexy!

I love this! Make some more yxy story again!

Very interesting perspective. Yami's a BA. Awesome

I'm pretty sure I remember reading the last version of this. This is one is much better and more developed, good job with that!

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bloody awesome fic!

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