This story is very good. You really get in to Zero's head, and how the others view him. It's really a very touching story. And filled with action, and all sorts of other explosive goodness. It's just awesome.

I love how Zero realized Iris' intentions; and how Zero realized he mustn't drown himself in his guilt.

I also love how Harpuia's mercy he had shown since Zero had paid him back with Leviathan and Fefnir.

Great story.

Thanks for this piece of work, this Zero was great, really I loved his characterisation and his work, plus his conversations owith both Ciel and X were also good, thanks for all!

No right or wrong? I don't know about that... and I'm not so sure your explanation for Iris was so believable either. I feel like everything tied up a little too neatly, but I don't mind, really. This has been a refreshing read, and you're right in that Zero needs to think about his own well being once in a while.

I'm also pleased to see that someone else besides me sees a sibling thing going on with the Shittenou- I always thought that seemed more plausible.

Thank you for the good story, and happy writing in your future endeavors! :3

I'm surprised, this story doesn't have more reviews.

Continue, please, it would be a shame to let thios story unfinished.

(Great characterisation of Zero, by the way!)

Um, this is excellent! You've characterized Zero VERY well. Maybe it's because you started out with a different, thought out point of view? I never thought humans would be working for the NA military. Good fight scenes too, dramatic and detailed w/o getting bogged down in the detail itself.

Thanks! I eagerly await the next chapter. :D