:D
adorable...
Sorry... don't have anything in specific to compliment.
it all fits together so smoothly.
well done.
XD

hehe... Nobu is funny.

there is luf... XD
I luf the beginning of this.
It provided enough background to give us a taste of them without overloading the palate and leaving some things to be discovered later.
Well done.

very good story, i can't wait to keep reading this when im not working.

? i completely approve of the shikaten (one of my favorite crack pairings, yayay!), and i'm not going to be the nejiten fangirl who demands a love triangle and for neji to be secretly obsessed with tenten...and i do think that neji can be an insensitive asshole...but why exactly does he hate her so much? i understand that you said that lee's death complicated their relationship, and that neji is reluctant to form close friendships because he views them as "weaknesses"...but his resentment/bitterness makes little sense to me. they've always appeared to get along quite well in canon, so it surprises me that he's so mean to her. i thought he would at least be respectful/professional/courteous so...it just doesn't make sense for him to be that much of an asshole, especially after naruto...

...ah, well XD i've yet to finish what you've written anyways, so maybe it'll be explained later? i've gotta finish it now :3

Wow. I love the story - it's sad that it's on hiatus. I hope your injury (if hiatus due to injury was indeed referring to that) gets better and/or that you are now healing. I would really love to hear more from this fic - I love their chemistry and the ideas you've brought in. :)

aww i know he didnt ask her out but still its the start to something better

brilliant i love nobu here :)

i love this. and i love how tenten is a little reckless

wow. i really liked it. i never really imagined shikamaru and tenten, but it seems like a good match. :)please do continue! its really coming along nicely!

Please please please let me know if u will be continuing this story. I really hope that u will. This is a great story. I love this pairing. This is also a very interesting plot. Please please please continue this story

I like your writing style and the pairing you used a lot But their is one thing which bother me and that is Tentens alcohol addiction and the reason why she became one. I cant imagine someone with a weak personality make it into anbu, you have to be stronger than that. But apart from that its a good story cant wait for he next chap

Hm, never really read about this couple before but you got me hooked hee hee there cute, awesome job. I love it! xP

This pairing sure is interesting, I wasn't really into them but you make it seem like they really are for each other, though my favourite pairing will always be nejiten, but it's nice to change once in a while and this fic sure is good, really ;)

Good luck.

BR.

I luff it, this pairing is so rare to find T.T you did a good job, keep it up