Omfg! GS fans!

I loved this fic so much, especially the ending when Dor and Al got married! I love those two as a couple :D! You really inspired me to re-write my old fanfics! MAR is my favourite anime!

Great story! You could really feel the war in this story as both sides collided. The Chess may have been defeated, but a few brave heroes lost their lives in the end. A truly dramatic story. Great job!

I decide to read fic once more I want to say "you are too UNDERESTIMATED Alviss and Dorothy". In anime version Alviss ever fight Ginta, Dorothy, Nanashi, Alan all by once. And the result is: Ginta and Dorothy run from battle, Alan, and Nanashi was knocked down. And he ever fight Orb once, and made Orb suffering. And Dorothy win when she challenge diana right? So, why hallowen can knock her down with single blow using napalm death? Even hallowen got stronger, he can't beat Dorothy with a single blow like that! And why candice can defeat brikin that easly? She didn't entered the training gate before it! How can she got stronger like that?

Great story! This is the real war! (I think)

o.o good ending, i skimmed through the chapters (like 1-2 min per ch.) and although ginta wasnt in it till ch 25, it was really well-written! GREAT JOB! XD

~vamp~

wow, sounds pretty interesting, but if ginta's not in it i'll discontinue reading it b/c i'm a ginta fan-girl *sweatdrops* i like the fact that you were able to finish a story (i can't do it for my life o.o) the stories i write at home never end, like they just want to keep going! .

~vamp~

Probably the best Mar fanfic I've ever read. That was purely amazing

erm sorry about the qns on Snow in the first chapter..i jumped to conclusions too fast.. since now is chapter 4, i think i should ask you..what happened to babbo?

awesome! by the way, where is Snow? i thought in the manga she isn't dead? although in the anime she is..

Nya, nya! I luv your story!

*sighs* So finally a good ending.

Rev. for c.24: The way Halloween died.. well, way sucked in my opinion, but really suits him - the pumpkin-headed was never a hero to die epically anyway.

Rev. for Epilogue: The best chapter, to my surprise, as suits this fic. But better was the omake - I rated The Old Liar 9.00 (ROFL - nostalgic old cheesy Chinese drama..) and 10.00 for Not Quite Dead LOL LOL LOL

ur welcome! this is a really good fic by the way i was in suspense most of the time and was happy when alviss and dorothy got together(i support them too) i cant wait to read another of ur stories

Such a good ending... The epilogue is...BEYOND FUNNY. The random stuff is AWSOME!

T-that was creepy...O.O Weasel scares me now...