I really enjoyed readying this story while i been at work and took me a week only, Excited to read more your stories :) Well done!

Now that I've finished the story, I ended up really liking it and appreciating the little twists you've added. I've seen too many remakes of the Chris and Haley story with the tour. It starts to feel like lazy plot writing after awhile. However, I really enjoyed your take on this actually and although I don't tend to like stories where they have kids with other people, I really loved this and thought it was well handled. It was a great story and after making some previous scathing criticisms, I think it deserves some high praise as well. Good job.

You had a really decent story going until you decided to just rewrite the exact story for Nathan and Haley that the show did... I'm so confused on why you do that with every story. Your writing is decent. Your creativity and original ideas could definitely use some work...

I love this story, even though this story ended years ago i think you should write an epilogue to show how their lives are...

loved it

Absolutely amazing story :)

chapter 4 was sooo funny especially the ending Xx love it already sooo much Xx

I absolutely loved this story! I couldn't stop reading it and I would've loved to see a future Naley and how their lives turned out. Awesome job!

Love

Amazing story I could not stop reading it.

Cela était une grande histoire ! J'ai aimé le complot et juste evrything. J'ai pensé la chose de Haley et Nathan a été parfaitement rallongé et c'était complètement grand.

Wow, I just discovered this ... what an amazing story, I read it all today! : ) I thought it was kind of a weird premise at first, but I fell in love with Nathan- Maddie and Lucas- Laney. They were so amazing together! Is there any hope of you ever doing that short sequel that wraps up the Lauren drama? I swear, people would still be interested- you have over 1800 reviews, which is amazing. I am so in love with the world you created, and I really hope you consider writing more in the One Tree Hill fandom! Thanks for sharing your gift with us. : )

WOW! That was a wonderful story! I do hope you write that short sequel because I would love to see what has happen to them and what happen with Maddie's mom.

This story was amazing and although it did take you long, you did take the time and commitment to finish it and this story was fantastic!

Awe, I love how Brooke is all concerned about Hales being alone on christmas, and how she wants Luke to call Nate to make sure she is ok! How adorable was the whole morning scene with Naley and Maddie! (seem like a little family already)

Great conversation btw Hales and Deb! Loved the almost Naley kiss, interrupted by Deb, who calls Hales on her we are just 'friends' comment! And Nate's be waiting for it! HOw cute is the concerned dad about his daughter choice to be like Hales... and luckily Hales came to the rescue using her power colour! I am looking forward to that kiss! :)