Suicide..whaaat...oh no..so it’s that what he means he never want to see her again coz he wil end up his life...oh pls don’t kill ichi here.,wake up hime..deym..leave kenny..it’s obvious u stil love ichi.,.pls continue this story...I loved this story :)...give ichihime a happy ending pls hehe

Poor ichi..pity him on this story..promises should be kept hehe..that’s y I pity him coz hime broke it..if they both swore to not fall in love with others..hime forgot the promise..deym..just pissed coz of the promise..y fall other if ud promise swore and u truly loved the man (ichi)..that’s y I’m pissed coz of the promise..waahhh

WHAT had u done..u ruined ichi’s life but I can’t put all the blame on her on this story..ichi has fault too he’s choosing fam but yeah fam first but I can’t just get it hahaha coz they can stil be together though away )if they love so much then distance is just nothing)..but in this story of course this is what author wants haha this is the story..it’s just hard to see a character of hime to neglect and forget her friends especially tatsuki—losing communication..not her char hehehe

Yeah what happen to the 5 lifetimes hime..dreams vs love...maybe hime had reason y she had fiancée and moved on..this is an interesting one..but pls hime should be with ichi again..waah...break the fiancée hehehe

Please update this Ichihime story. It’s dark and angsty and very well written. I hope Orihime and Ichigo get together at the end.

oh my god! kenny's appearence is just similar like ulquiorra #gasp but im happy it wasnt ulqui though,in the end he will not separated again with hime #crying.. thank you for not using ulquiorra #bighug well,i just found this awesome story and you got to be kidding me. IM IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY! im ulquihime fans btw,but i like ichihime .hell,im in love with your story

Oh my poor babies! :'( Ugh,il loving all these chapters yet I want to capture Ichigo and Orihine so they can kiss and make up! :D

Uhm don't get me wrong as this is how the real world works. Kenny having sex with hime made me angry. I just pray that ichi find someone else to love! Hime moved on so should ichi there is no point running aftr hime !

this is depressing Q_Q

! update this fanfic and "Surrender" as soon as possible

wow truly amazing story :) please try to continue an update as soon as possible ok :-)

ive never understood emos or cutter before. i just figure that if something in ur life sucks, fix it and move on. but reading this it made me feel that well, some people cant. but ichigo should try. i jsut seems weird for him to be the weak crying lol!

Love it your a great writer Orihime and Ichigo for ever

Nice to see an update after a long while!

It's also nice to see the quality hasn't dropped.

One thing I'd criticize on though, is the usage of "fuck" as to describe something, particularly in the lines "He knew his breakup with Orihime had fucked him up. But seeing her again really fucked him up."

I don't mind it so much in speech, but using it as a way to describe something brings down the quality of the narration a little bit.

Sure, the reader may understand what is meant, but surely there are better, more proper/sophisticated words that could have been used.

Hope to see more updates soon! )

damn this story is good no great