Kaosu: Woah. This story would fit perfectly. Let's look at it as addition for a moment. Chelle's mother Bring Your Daughter to Work Day (Which GLaDOS even says is the perfect time to have her tested) jumpsuit a "Brief" detention in the relaxation vault of several years explanation of how Chelle gets there. GLaDOS potential test subject a few "loose screws", ignoring the pun why GLaDOS killed everyone, except, for the specific storyline, Chelle. It also explains varios parts of GLaDOS's words. No friends: No time to make any friends. Orphan: Mother killed my GLaDOS, father left mother and daughter some time between birth of daughter and death of wife. Not mourned: no one left TO mourn for her.

Sorry, I couldn't help myself. The story made me temporarily be smart in 'public'. XD

Anyway, I really like the story, and it works perfectly.

whoa "Mi'Chell'e

nice job in seing the view of an aperture employee. and explaining the cake is also made of scientists, and girls makes me kinda sad, yet it is good

Hm...

Very well done. Very.

Awesome.

I am torn between bidding you continue or bidding you let it stop here. That last letter is creepy as hell, if only because we know how it turns out, and sure makes a dramatic conclusion.

On the other hand, I would totally like to see your take on what happens next.

Good stuff, either way.

The ending... Gave me shivers. XD

Extremely well written. Fantastic adaptation, this should so be official material. If the timing is right, and Portal takes place when Gordon is in HL2, then it's perfect. However Portal might take place earlier during combine occupation, because some technology in Aperture seems very similar to the combine's, which can mean that they had time to find, "borrow" and adapt it to their liking.

But the writing is superb. Very well done :D

WOW! You have officially amazed me! You brought a fictional character into the Half-Life Universe and you capture the life of a woman scientist! Kudos to you and great job! Keep up the great work! 10/10

Wow. That was cute, funny, and just a little ominous. You manage to say so much with so few words. This is an excellent fic.

That was wonderful. Maybe you could do a chapter with all of Gordon's response letters. Good work.

Oh, and that last letter? Really creepy!

Good job! I found this story quite inspiring, as the way you wrote it was quite different.(I mean in form of letters) You also made me realise the true extent of GLaDOS's evil deeds, and made me feel that good people have been sacrificed for GLaDOS's amusement.

One thing I would like to comment on is this doesn't really fit with the story as presented on from the website, I received the impression that the employees were oppressed by their supervisors, and they certainly would not allow out-going mail, especially on the day before the unveiling of GLaDOS. But i understand the necessity of the last letter to the integrity of the story, so i believe you just had to go with the lesser of two evils.

Anyway, well done!

Wow... that seems to be the best that I can come up with to describe this piece that you have composed. It actually sounds like she's talking as a living, breathing human being. I will admit that I found myself questioning the subject matter at first, but after reading I have but one conclusion. I loved it all. There are very few authors that can actually make a character come to life as you made her in this fic. Congratulations are in order my friend. :)

OMG I LOVE IT!

It's so nifty reading all this, thinking; "I wonder what she'll write about next!" Especially if you read it from Gordon's POV.

And then it just stops after GLaDOS comes up. (For obvious reasons.) So sad! Yet funny!

Here's hoping you never run out of cake!

Awesome, I like it a lot! I'm guessing that the little girl is possibly Chell? I was always confused as to what time period Portal was set in, though. I like the idea of a girl coming onto Gordon, Alyx is just too damned submissive when it comes to that!