That's pretty funny!

Adorable and funny. I loved it!

I can't believe this thing only got 2 reviews! It literally made me laugh at loud!

As was mentioned before, you managed to truly capture the voice of all the characters, and I think their responses in the story were pretty accurate.

The Chinese didn't bother me, but for those who don't like scrolling to the end, maybe you can put the translations in parenthesis within the dialog.

All in all, a great read!

Very nice so far. Hope you update soon. Looking forward to reading more. _

Hey!

I really like it! Your characterisation is good, and you've managed to capture the mood of the show, which I always thought was quite difficult.

One minor niggle: You use a lot of Chinese, which breaks the flow a little for non-Chinese speakers (i.e. me), who can't wait until the end to see what they mean, so keep scrolling up and down. It helps with the atmosphere, so don't get rid of it (definitely not!), but perhaps consider cutting back on them a bit?

Otherwise, it's really, really good! Nice and light.

JuliennePotato