| Reviews for A New Life |
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ArashiNokitsune chapter 33 . 5/10 Will he ever get back to them though |
F077 chapter 1 . 4/25 Muy buen capitulo me gusto mucho |
917brat chapter 33 . 3/31 can you make a sequel to this where Naruto does come back to them? Just a small happy ending one where he can have a family with them? |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/19 Isnt mokuton formed with wather earth and yang chakra? |
Ryu wolf chapter 33 . 6/8/2019 Awesome story it’s very fun to read though I gotta ask do u plan on making a second season to this story? |
ExtraterrestrialFlyingCat chapter 1 . 5/27/2019 why is this not in the crossover section |
Guest chapter 33 . 5/20/2019 Y el epilogo |
Loyal Fan chapter 33 . 3/11/2019 Are you dead? |
Xzyxx chapter 1 . 1/6/2019 That was beautiful. It was engaging all the way through despite a few errors here and there. The story was well thought through but it left me with a few questions. They're not mind boggling so I'll not bother you with them but I hope you keep writing. The end is bittersweet and I hope he finds his way back. Thank you for the wonderful fic. :) |
KitsuneDxD chapter 1 . 11/29/2018 this fic is one of the best I ever read |
Mehehe chapter 1 . 11/27/2018 First chapter, info dump. Lots of tell no show. Can live with that it's setting the scene. Then while prepping and launching a city killing attack(it tells us this) Naruto says "Cease this foolishness Sasuke!" I think alright this is just stupid and exit out. Then I start thinking. The author has Naruto speaking so out of character while firing a city killing attack against a target close enough to hear him speak during an attack against his home town Lol this story just went full retard. Never go full retard. I am going to finish reading this chapter to see if Naruto is really stupid enough to kill himself and destroy the town he is defending with the equivalent of a tactical nuke. |
Kurama chapter 33 . 7/26/2018 Please bring out a part two. |
Jixray chapter 22 . 7/23/2018 Vinslet is just basically Shikamaru. How am I just now noticing it? |
XXX777 chapter 22 . 7/16/2018 Nice OC Pokegirls the Shrine Oracle and Leviathan. Very good work. |
Astromormy chapter 33 . 4/17/2018 HOT DAMN! This story was beyond amazing. I can't say I'm happy Naruto killed himself, but I can see why you did it like that, and you pulled it off stupendously. Everything about this story was awesome, from the character development, to the plot, all the way to the conclusion. The only complaint I have to add is that you didn't really close out the Team Trauma arc as they still seem to be around, despite Naruto destroying a major base and killing their leader. Of course, this is mostly inferred, but it's just to point out that you could have had Naruto finish off Team Trauma permanently instead of just wounding them. It'd have also been interesting to see if Naruto managed to rebuild any kind of relationship with Macavity after her betrayal. The same with Moan seeing as she was just an interesting character that had only been hinted at beforehand. |