I know it's been years since you post anything Death Note related but I just wanted you to know that people still read this in 2013. And I was just wondering if you ever planned to finish this story. Because it's perfect!

It's well written you have a plot line and you have Namoi and L! How could it not get any better.

And this also goes to your other stories as well. Their perfect just perfect but I don't know if you ever planned on finishing them.

I hope you don't think that I am nagging you to finish the story. I just think it's a really good story it has the potential to be something great.

huh...ya know i saw this on the Lxnaomi community...very good!

/berry-chan\

Why have you written a piece so convincingly Lovecraftian, and literary and place it here, when you could submit it to the various horror magazines/fanzines and likely be seriously considered for paid publication? Excise the Death Note references, and you have an excellent story to be seriously considered for publication. Bravo for a realistic atmosphere and a well-designed ending.

LNaomi ... dream! Adding this to my favorites!

Intense, suggestive and dignified.

I'll be looking forward to the development of such stimulating material. Here's a plaudit to you.

-Cooper-

Quite interesting. Death Note with a mix of Lovecraft. Not bad.