Reviews for Penal Servitude
Guest chapter 23 . 4/13/2019
This was an awesome story. Super easy to follow but still enough going on to make you think and a lot of character revelation or development.
Guest chapter 23 . 1/20/2019
bravo! a wonderful story!
Poledne chapter 11 . 9/13/2018
I LOVE THIS STORY.
Poledne chapter 8 . 9/13/2018
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Guest chapter 23 . 5/18/2018
Amazing story! Loved every it of it. I always felt that the scariest villain in the HP series was Umbridge...
Thanks for sharing.
sweetysmart0505 chapter 23 . 2/1/2018
10 years since this story was finished, but it has aged well. The only minor note of discord I read was how well Severus had mentally survived so many years of torture. Despite that, I'd say that this story deserves an 'E' for Exceeds Expectations. Well done.
Guest chapter 23 . 5/7/2017
captivating story. very well written, thank you!
whitehound chapter 15 . 7/7/2016
I'm re-reading this, and although you corrected Narcissa's hair in chapter 13 the correction somehow didn't take - you've still got her with black hair like her sisters, although I like Jean's suggestion that she might be a *dyed* blonde.
Guest chapter 23 . 6/10/2016
This was an amazing story, very much portrayed the unbreakable side we all know and love about Snape, I wished it was a bit longer though. Is it too late for a sequel?
RainCityWriter chapter 23 . 6/8/2015
I enjoyed this story very much. Your characterization of Snape is very on-character, and the suspense and storytelling were excellent. Thanks!
scgaraycochea chapter 23 . 1/12/2015
Wow! A powerful story!
I really loved it, thank you for share it with us. I love the character of Severus and you did an incredible job keeping him as he is the the books.
You are a great writing I will be reading more of your fics.
hpsslily chapter 23 . 7/22/2014
Some more of harry would have been preferred
But good one!
guest chapter 23 . 9/28/2013
wow, good story and undervalued if you count the number of reviews...
whovian chapter 23 . 9/25/2013
I only have one word: wonderful. What an amazing story. I read all of it in one sitting. The absolute best fanfiction I have read in months. You are very talented, and I loved the way you hinted at some of the more graphic parts but didn't let the story dissolve into porn. I hope you keep writing, you're wonderful at it!
muumi2three chapter 23 . 7/15/2013
The story kept me reading from chapter to chapter without wanting to take time to review! (Those cliffhangers can work against the author's desire for reviews.) The surprising departure from the usual cliches of "slave fiction" and foray into mystery and action/adventure was extremely well done and makes for a very satisfying tale with a lot of twists and turns that really took my breath away. Severus's return to Azkhaban for instance. Utterly unexpected, very well written in plot and characterization. Kudos!
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