Well written Beth and Alice meet. Interesting times ahead, interesting times indeed.

Well written. My hands are clapping. Please write more - you have their voices down pat.

Excellent writing - just great. You have their voices down pat. I like both of those fellows a great deal.

This was very well written. More writing please - you have Josef's voice down pat and I like this very strong woman, Alice.

I like it. Intriguing plot. More soon?

I just have to review... I love your writing style... Your descriptions are wonderful and allow the reader to truly live within the story...

I look forward to more :)

Uh-oh. I have a feeling that Mick won't be happy about another vamp watching Beth. Oh...*giggles excitedly* please update soon!

Adore the Detectives attitude toward Beth he's more righ that he knows but Beth isn't your average reporter, now is she, lol, she's got someone looking out for her, and he's pretty hard to kill. Nicely done, and Davis' frustrations was well put, he's not my fav charater but I can see when a sideline character is done well.

Some could do well to take a page from your book, myself included. Kudos. Keep writing! Moonlights needs you!

Good start, you're doing an admirable job setting everything up, creating a dire situation. I look forward to the point where you sink your teeth into the real meat of the story.

Definitely something I want to keep reading. Intruiging and beautifully written. Update soon!

Oh. I like it. Very cool. Thnx 4 finally writing a fanfic with a lot of Josef. what happens next? what happens next?

Been keeping up with this on too. Am really enjoying it and can't wait for more. :)

This was brilliant, loved how you described Josef and that bit with Alice and Mick having something in common? There's TONS you can do with that bit, maybe even have a rival for his affections eh? Lol. I'm always looking for the lvoe angle to go with the investigation. OH and whens Beth gonna drop in? Wouldn tit be drop-dead funny if she came by/walked in when Mick's having a discussion with ALice? wouldnt THAT be something. Anyhow, more please? I was thrilled, yes thrilled to see some Moonlight fanfic out there! When will Moonlight get its own catagory i wonder? Oh well.

This was a wonderful piece of work and i cannot say how exited i am for the next update.

Ooh, I'm intrigued now! Can't wait for the next part,

~outlaw author