| Reviews for You're Too Apologetic |
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   Xyra Kaze chapter 3 . 2/4/2013 That was the cutest little ending ever. YOu make them seem so cute together! |
| Xyra Kaze chapter 2 . 2/4/2013 Wow a little over dramatic but i found it funny anyway. |
| Xyra Kaze chapter 1 . 2/4/2013 Wow... okay maybe that was a bit harsh but i think that i would also be annoyed |
| thelastunicorn chapter 3 . 10/20/2011 i love this story. it is really good. |
| kumagorox3 chapter 3 . 2/20/2009 Well I'm happy. :D good story! two chapters then you went RIGHT to the lemon~! ;] The best part was the NEAR FLAWLESS GRAMMAR AND PUNCTUATION! Yay! _; Kudos to you! |
| angelbird2 chapter 3 . 7/27/2008 that is so SWEET I LOVE THIS PAIRING |
| Sasuky4774 chapter 3 . 2/22/2008 that was great i can't bevelieve that was your first lemon oh i'm so gonna read the narusasu |
| Mrs Hatake Itachi chapter 3 . 2/6/2008 Nice story! |
| timme chapter 3 . 1/26/2008 so nice they both apologized instead of naruto acting stuck up or something. cute fic. |
| timme chapter 1 . 1/26/2008 oh geez. everyone blows up at the people they love when they're exhausted or pissy. you're not supposed to take it seriously. |
| CrazedPanda93 chapter 1 . 1/25/2008 i think u should continue it i would love 2 c what happens |
| reychop chapter 4 . 12/14/2007 Wah! I am already hard! God I love the lemon. Oh, I found this funny (I don't know if it is intentional or unintentional) but: In the chapters, you marked 3 as chapter 4 instead of chapter 3. Anyway, I liked this story. 5 Stars! Hehehe |
| if-life-gives-you-lemons chapter 4 . 12/9/2007 you did not put in a chapter 3 but apart frof that. IT WAS BRILENT! if a bit too soppy. |
| Lovely Spell chapter 3 . 11/7/2007 Before this chapter your story was pretty good. I like the cute one shot plot. It was a simple problem that was cute to see resolved. I don't like the way it was dealt with in the end, but quite honestly the emotions where there. I actually wanted to cry a bit for Naruto. Once I read ch.3 I was a bit dissapointed because most of those scenes weren't your own words. I've read enough to know when a writer is only editing/fixing scenes they've read before. Try to stay away from lines like "It threw him over the edge" and "making him see (white) stars". Those lines are very cliche and devalue your own originality. All in all you did a good job with spelling/grammar. Thanks for sharing! ja LS |
| Sora Keyblader chapter 3 . 11/2/2007 OMFG when Sasuke said he wanted to fuck Naruto in the table and then went ‘Actually, that’s not a bad idea…’ THAT MADE ME DIE SO BAD! XD that's HilariousE! because it's so unexpected! Oh kinky SASUKE! GOOD JOB ON THE FIC! I give you 1,0 points out of 10! D |
