great story i loved it

egad! keep writing plz

ok i was gonna wait till i finishd the whole story but i couldnt. it was really bugging me.

idk if anyone else noticed that the whole growth rate of the twins is really fast,lyk how it was in Breaking i also saw tht u startd ths story way b4 that book en came out.

idk i just thought it was kinda wierd,you know,it probably means nothng but i juat had to say somthng it was bothring me:D

great storie tho:D

Oh, I loved it to be sure, but, erm... wow. I, erm, I don't know what to quite make of it i'm afraid. It's really really good though. Great job! I like the triplets names. They're... shall I put it...ingenious. Any ways I'm waiting for the next chapters in anticipation.

there were a lot of spelling errors like 'toke' the correct spelling is 'took' but besides that the story was pretty good

Nice I liked it, is there a sequel?

oh...no

Hi,

i saw your Story in the german fanfiktion site and i was very ardent. But the person that translate it, stopped at the 11. chapter ,because something was wrong with her computer.

I thought i have to read it on and i must say, in english its better actually.

Your spelling style is fantastic !

I hope you can go on soon.

Love

Stephanie

P.S. I hope you can read my bad english.

trimesters go by 3s hense the prefex TRI.

great story but you have to improve some of your grammars

Odd, not much detial, I could hardly keep up, but it was good for the most part I think.

I just wanted to give you a little constructive criticism. Go through and read your story out loud. It'll help you realize that you're missing punctuation and that your style is a little repetitive. You want to avoid starting every sentence with 'I' and to mix up the structure. Good Luck :)

That was great...

I really like the story.

Its an interestung idea, and I think that's one of my favorite storys.

I hope you write some other storys about Twilight, and I can read them.

Susan

You suck.

it was a cute story