| Reviews for Last Chance |
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   Deleque chapter 1 . 7/25/2015 It's cute, very cute, but the lack of punctuation for dialogue was kind of unattractive and made it awkward to read. |
| animechik16 chapter 1 . 9/5/2013 Always double check spelling. The lemon seemed a little rushed but it was written well with good descriptions. Keep it up :) 2lazy2login, animechik16 |
| wingsoflove chapter 1 . 11/14/2010 So freakingly hot! Whew! |
| Angel of Pandemonium chapter 1 . 10/19/2010 it. |
| Narutoismylifeok chapter 1 . 6/16/2010 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww! they belong together! |
| rgbygc chapter 1 . 4/17/2010 i loved it it was great you should write more nejiten please |
| Mi3staR chapter 1 . 1/22/2010 0.0 omg i remember this story it was like a month I read this story i think during science class oh yah! : DD on my phone that is : )) yea k, so this is my sexond time reading this :) I love this story, but yea the mission was a little too short but doesn't matter you get more points on the lemons, the beginning of the lemon was a little too quick, it climax too fast I sigh but the fucking scene was really good :)) loved it. |
| XoTentenXgurlXo101 chapter 1 . 6/21/2009 Cool I like it |
| gjfsdkdhgjltdfl chapter 1 . 5/18/2009 i loved it. I'm planning to read one of your story's Outcasts but have no idea what it will be about, the summery was kind of confusing XD so if maybe u could give a more detailed one, i would really appreciate it. i heard it is good, read it on a site withs recommend a couple of fan fictions and u where in his top 5. hope to hear from ya soon (don't realy know how this site works so if u can't see my e-mail on my blog here it is ,i know its gay but it's no fake XD) |
| snowbird66 chapter 1 . 11/19/2008 Wow, that was a great NejixTen story and you did an excellent job keeping Neji in character. |
| sasukerocks123 chapter 1 . 11/9/2008 wow... awesome story, but i do NOT want to know where the inspiration came from! |
| purple-ladybug chapter 1 . 9/3/2008 I was very pleased with your neji/tenten, usually the stories seem so unlikely, but you wrote a very wonderful story! |
| jadedsiren chapter 1 . 8/14/2008 Nice and steamy! but i thought you should have added more detail and took your time over the mission piece of the story they are after all Ninja. But on a really positive note I thought you kept them in character. neji's thoughts sounded so neji. I adore him and Tenten. good job |
| SachikoHitsugaya chapter 1 . 7/13/2008 I loved it! You totally brought out the Kakashi me! I can imagine Neji doing that! They are ment. Nejiten forver! xoxo(ok maybe not the x's) Sachiko |
| P chapter 1 . 6/7/2008 o.0 good! |
