Reviews for Bathing in the Afternoon
VKLOREO23 chapter 1 . 7/11/2013
I liked it very much sucks they got interrupted
Ladii Emelia chapter 1 . 11/29/2011
Cute story.
AncientPurebloodPrincessLolita chapter 1 . 11/16/2011
Perfect, simply, perfect.

You captured their dynamic so well...I'm honestly in awe.

Hagi was in-charcter and so was Saya (as much as can be guessed for her personality after she awakes since it chances ever-so often).

And of course, Hagi will wait. He always does.
AJLYAMBER96 chapter 1 . 9/2/2011
that was actually sweet. wow
HimeHeenim chapter 1 . 4/17/2008
LOL

That was really funny but it was beautifully written too! Thank you for writing this. I have always wanted to read on SayaHagi's relationship after Saya is awake. This entertained me greatly.

Do continue writing!Especially on their adventures after Saya's awakening. How I wish they would be together. _
Joker'sWife chapter 1 . 3/31/2008
Wo!

Saya wanted to get busy ]

GO SAYA!

You should really continue this.
Nikkii-hime chapter 1 . 1/12/2008
It was all like BOW CHICKA WOW WOW xD nice fanfic I really enjoyed it I was at the edge of my seat and then I read that the neoce was banging and the door and was all D: Poor Haji he was about to get him some too
animeXmangaXobsessed chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
oh my goodness! dany, you got us so exited and worked up and then let us down! lol jk. very good execpt that i wish one of the twins didn't interept...
edhel espyn chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
Gosh darnit! Those pesky nieces! xD
cherryopsicle chapter 1 . 1/6/2008
lol, so wonderfully and humoruously written ;D
Yamitori chapter 1 . 12/30/2007
LOL hahahahahahahahahahaha
Mercury0Falling chapter 1 . 12/16/2007
beatiful. now only if those damned nieces weren't like OMGSHOES.
AbunaiTenshi chapter 1 . 12/14/2007
Haji is such a poor dear... he has to always wait for her!

Anyway, great story:) Got me beggin' for more!
sillimiss chapter 1 . 12/2/2007
very nice
Onigiri Samurai chapter 1 . 11/25/2007
Thats a great story! Saya must have been a little annoyed at her niece for innterupting... but is makes it funny. Please continue.
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