Awww cute and awesome,I loved it and nice job

Damn, your stories make my day. Seriously, I love YuBo and you write them so well together. It's pure fluff without being too OOC or overly dramatic. I like. :) I really hope you continue to write! I love your work!

Take care, dearie. -

so. freakin hot O.o

this was sooooo cute! the whole idea of writing on the notebook was really great and jealous bryan is the best bryan!

loved it loved it loved it! perfectly written too!

I cant of anything to say other then Fantastic!

This one was very cute too.

The notebook thing is hilarious. The saying Bryan's name part is my favorite though. He should have expected him to react that way.

I liked this one too. 3

"Bryan."

Bryan grinned, bringing his head closer and tilting it to the side, "I love hearing you say my name. Say it again."

"Bryan..." Tala started, but was cut off by said boy's lips."

I loved that I dialogue!

It was sweet and... ...é a sentence that Bryam would really say for Tala!

Fic great! Congratulations!

Nice *whistles*

Want more where that came from

Aw that was cute :)

Me loves you! So god!

Garland's nose deserved to be broken XP Bad Garland, thinking about Tala like that.

I love BryanxTala! Most people write TalaxBryan and I don't like that. Bryan is the ultimate seme. In Beyblade, anyway.

This was too cute Seriously, I loved the little notes Bryan left on Tala's notebook.

What a cute little piece of fanfiction. I wouldn't mind a notebook with all my negative traits on it, probably look pretty cool actually. Oh and nice punch Bryan!

OMG that was so good, I loved it!1

O_O

I'm not good in speaking english but... THIS Fiction has to get a comment!

It's fantastic!

I LOVE it *_*

absolutly aw... xD

more! *_*