love all of them! i really like these oneshots! want more please! :]

These are all so sappy, but argh, I love them. I love them so much :'D

Just caught up with and read all 7 chapters. I think you captured Takaya and Naoe perfectly. I loved how you creatively used the dialogue from different episodes to make our two boys just talk to each other. I love the last chapter 7...the way our two boys came together at the end. Cool. Hope you write more.

This would have been more satisfying for the fan base but, well, it wouldn't be MOB without all the soap opera angst. Thank you for writing a short take that would still leave room for their trials and tribulations. :-)

aww! this chapter is so kewt! its like they never had a love/hate relationship the past 400 years. naoe was so happie, he didn't even remember to wear his clothes! about the phone scene, i was thinking of takaya feeling hungry, and naoe suggest they have room service (with an ebil smile) takaya did as that (and while calling, he's still naked) naoe took the chance to 'attack' his lover boy by pleasuring his neck and chest (nosebleed) ahem, and takaya tried desperately to sound normal (without making his moans and panting too loud) through the phone...

ok! why don't i just write the whole thing? well, anyway, i was just suggesting.

(1) why do i get no mention?

(2) this was almos complete crap... and i'm being nice...

(3) why was this so short?

(4) 1-3 should be enough!

sincerely,

Erica

Awesome! This is how the anime should of gone! _ That part at the end 'Correct me if I’m wrong here, but shouldn’t you get dressed first, Naoe?'lol! Hope you update soonish! ,

I like chp 6! it almost has a taste of betrayal and that always stirrs up interest!

how about something reverse where naoe had an accident and got amnesia? The great naoe does not recognise that man of his affection for hundredds of yrs! takaya tried to recover their relationship with no avail. the end of course if up to you!

hehehhehe ... thanks!

i can imagine naoe dancing with a lady, but with another man?

hmm ...er ... anyway, it's great ending!

ya pls b nawt leavin' Mirage of Blaze evr agn k?

I liked it. I'm glad Naoe wasn't a cheating bastard.

Thank you so much, for updating, your the best!-

The story was so awesome! As for ideas, um...

1.) I suppose you could have Takaya's father come into the picture, you know there would be some drama there[especially since he used to abuse Takaya].

2.) You could do something involving Halloween [I know it is a bit early in the year but you can never go wrong there!And there isn't any MOB Halloween fics as far as I can tell.]

3.)Something with Naoe saving the day

4.)T. gets sick

Well I'm all out of ideas, hope they help! Again, I bow to your greatness, and hope you will continue soon!,

Cool. Totally worth the wait. I don't think Takaya ever saw Naoe with anyone else in the anime or the manga. Sometimes jealousy will get someone to 'act' quicker then anything else. :-) Thank you for coming back and writing. But having gone through a very short writing phase, I know the feeling can come and go, just like 'that'.

OMG! This is totally awesome, and you have the NERVE to not continue!. I will find a way to annoy you until you update!_ YOU WILL CONTINUE!

these are fun add more. new story idea. Naoe goes to the library to clear his head from another episode w/ takaya. they meet each other there and naoe finds takaya reading icha icha paradice (that is from naruto) and is very surprized. takaya gets embarassed and then it evolves into a lover's make out scene/lemon. plz?

sincerely,

eric

Aw, but there's no more after this one! How will I get my Naoe/Takaya oneshot fix if you don't write any more.

Funny, when I was reading this and Takaya was out in the rain, I couldn't help but get a little side-tracked with thinking "ooh, Takaya, Naoe, rain, holding hands!" Thank you so much for posting all of these. Still can't decide which one was my favourite though. But reading them did brighten my day!