I really love this fic for 2 reasons. First, I love Severus and when he's time traveling. But your fic don't make a choice who is a mistake to me and who appending generally in Second chance storys: Severus speaking about it to Dumbledore or trust him. Beyong the fact I didn't like Dumbledore, he was like the second master of Severus and betrayed him (to me) for "The Greatest Good" and if Sev was actually traveling time, he will never trust him or kneel before anybody, light or dark, specially before his Second Master, the one who favorise Griffindor and Greatest Good and who ask to him to kill him. Dumbledore hurt to munch Severus in his first life for he never trust him again, he's a proud Slytherin, not a Griffindor.

Golden

This is one of the best second-chance SSLEs I've read. The characterizations are excellent, the plot compelling, and the ending realistic in the human sense. No life can be happily-ever-after, or a life with Snape sugar-sweet, but well worthwhile? Oh yes.

Congratulations!

Aaargh - I'd forgotten that, at this stage, the sword is just a normal valuable goblin-made weapon, and not a basilisk-blood-infused Horcrux-destroyer. As had Severus, evidently, but either being sent back to a different timeline obliterated some of his memories, or he had never actually been told (probably Dumbledore had just told him that Harry and his friends would need the sword to complete their quest, without explaining why). What was MY excuse for forgetting?

this was too gud, Dark Lord Snape

Bravisimo! that was awesome to read, kept going chapter after chapter, i couldnt put it down so to speak, i like how you hadled Severus in this fic, and i hope i can keep as close to his cannon nature in my fic as possible even with my chnages. Thank you for the read it was very enjoyable. just realized how old this story is but all of what ive said still stands.
Later Daze

I liked this story very much. The Sneaky Slytherin Trio was my favorite , but I also liked Lily well enough. Though, I have to say, that last part with Lucius and the diary was THE BEST LOL! ;D

Well and truly

Oh That was truly epic. A "Blaze of Glory" if ever there was one ;)

Well, how about that? I like Lily too! Well done ;)

This story is really good so far

lol

I love how horrible Sev is in this! Some people just write him as a black-and-white hero-type character, which he obviously is not, and I'm just so very glad that you don't ;) This is MUCH more like the Severus I know! He is most certainly not evil... but that doesn't mean he can't be a bit wicked sometimes ;) I love 'im! ;D LOL

Awww

This is my favorite chapter so far; I love these three ;)