Reviews for The End of Shinobi
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11/2015
All so I believe it should countine on to the legend of korra and I think both should falllow the story line but ther should be More vilens and differ types of bender like plant benders and shadow benders and I also believe Naruto should have gone back to sleep after aangs death until its time for Naruto to train korra.
Guest chapter 2 . 8/11/2015
I think you should introduce Naruto when aang and the gang go to the air temple and also I think Naruto should be a well know legend and should be immortal and unkillable and he should have a resting place in the hall if avatars which contains a library with all know knowledge from the ninja era from all know ninjutsu, taijutsu, genjustsu, fuinjutsu and more to mathematics, science, physics, and more. Along a with a armory and a tomb/bedroom/tree where he has slept whin his god tree for ten billon years but the trees rots are all over the world which allows him to to see and know every thing going on. Also I think Naruto should be the second shinju wolf/tree has the ability to bend and do jutsu of any kind and has a dojutsu that is a combination of all the doujutsu with all of there a abiltys and the ability to control and bend any thing from plants, fire, water, space, time, to light and shadows to reality and life and death to creation and destruction all is his to control, he even has the all the posibale psiconic abiltys.
godzillafan1 chapter 2 . 10/14/2012
good story though i think the avatar gang minus toph were acting like a bunch of idiots they didn't seem to understand naruto's pain at all so it looks like this is going to be a naruto harem story guess it's just going to be toph,ty lee,and azula but why would you pair sokka with mai? zuko and mai make a better couple so why pair her up with that idiot? that's just wrong oh well i hope you'll get back to writing this story eventually.
LancerLead chapter 2 . 4/23/2009
Well this is a different start. I hope Naruto will mellow out a bit and stop acting so... "Hyuuga" like. I can't wait to see how you incorporate the others of the Narutoverse. I can already see Maye as Ten-Ten. Keep up the good work!
Nordvegr chapter 1 . 4/14/2009
I'm not really fond of being forced to do things, so I choose to review because I want to instead of because you are stealing my keyboard...
Mr.Niggly Wiggly chapter 1 . 2/21/2009
Its good really good. You must update.
Akren Alumni chapter 1 . 2/3/2009
...now that i think about it ty lee does seem like a female lee...ITS CREPY lol
Tachi Kagahara chapter 2 . 1/11/2009
Dear Kaishi no Kokuei,

you made a lot of ocs in this story but thats ok

because your not writing can i borrow you idea of the immortal naruto in the avatar world im going to change it some but it will be kind'a the same idea i'll give you a week and a half to reasond via e-mial if you don't then i will take thats as a "i don't care" and i will write my ne story ofcourse giving you props in the summary. i will change the story just enough so i don't get in trouble for copying.
ryu chapter 2 . 12/20/2008
add toph azula too its rare and nobodys done it before
Shakatan chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
This is brilliant, great crossover. Though you should mention AVATAR crossover in the summary for the story so people searching for Naruto/Avatar crossovers can find it in the search engine easily. I only found this by luck of reading one of your other stories through a community and finding it so good I had to see what your others were like. 9/10 for the fic.
Chaos728 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
I just wanted to know if this is a Naruto/Harem Fanfic? If it is, I will be adding it to My Naruto C2: A Hero's Harem.

Also let me know if you know any that fit int My C2's Description. They are stories that must have Naruto with at least 2 or more girls. Naruto/Harem, Naruto/Multi, Naruto/Many, ect...
dragonmage666 chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Sorry i am the same one who just reviewed and my SN was diffrent sorry it had more to it but now i am signed in and it is all fixed.
Dragonmage chapter 1 . 7/23/2008
Amazeing peice of work. I hope you come back to work on this more. I have been looking thru works of a avatar/naruto crossover and you did one seemlessly and i love it. I hope you worke more on it and come and compleat it soon. Dragonmage is my sn on this site and you can pm me if you wish to respond to this review.
Peinx7 chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
dude very cool story! never saw a naruto/azula or naruto/ty lee before :D
Redflash's Legacy chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
I can't stop reading this story! It's that awesome. Please update soon.
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