Dark. Very dark. An exploration of Roxas' faux hatred and disturbances when dealing with Sora. Very, very good.

0_0 Wow. That was creepy and cool at the same time.

Uh - I don't know what to say. It was generally short, but the impact of your fic left me, um, what's the perfect word for it? Speechless. Yeah, shrugs, I guess that would be it. Roxas' angst...felt very real, and I liked how you compared his anger against Sora's happiness. Your writing style made the entire fic very powerful, short as it is, and I think that's what makes it most commendable about it. What I liked most? The final sentence. It sorta had that 'zomg-drop-jaw-on-floor-now' kinda of impact on me. XD

liked this, favoriting.

this is pretty good! i liked the way you explored how Roxas feels about existing and such. its different. nicely done!

*flabbergasted* Oh my...

this was pretty much real, Roxas fake pain becoming real... this piece is wonderful in its own way *fell in love*

o...I liked it! I've never actually played Kingdom Hearts 2, but I have heard a lot about Roxas. He seems like such a tortured soul.