AHHH! I LOVED IT D that was an amazing oneshot!

I love your story! 5/5 :)

Although I don't necessarily like the Minato/Karura pairing and never thought of the Minato is Temari's father theory, they were really well put in the story and it was overall very enjoyable.

There aren't many fictions about Karura and I liked how you portrayed her and her life.

It all just flowed really smoothly. She's bored with her marriage, she likes Minato, her husband beats her and angers her, she goes gets drunk and ends up having a one night stand with Minato, they know they can't continue their relationship so stop, but she gets pregnant, and she makes her husband believe the kid is hers... Do you understand what I mean by "your story is realistic"?

You're very good with details and liked how the story was risque but tasteful :)

I'll favorite your story ;)

Wow, that was really good. Definatly a *fav*

WOW is all i have to say, but it does epllain a lot

Really good story. My only complaint is, as a mother of 2, a week after sex is too soon to tell if a woman is pregnant. It's more like 3 to five weeks. Unless pregnancy tests have changed in the last couple of years...

Ah well! Like I said, I like this story!

-Angel

Haha, no, you spelled her name right... it's Karura... Like Dei-dei's favorite attack.

Aw, you did my favorite angsty pairing! Thank you! *hug*

It's very angsty, and very good, especially for 4 in the morning.

That was A good story:)

O I like it:D