Hhhhh ya had to leave me hanging

Damn I'm really loving this, can't wait for more, if there's more to come

Oh crap an updateThxu!

I've been looking for a fic like this for a loooong time. Thank you.

Always nice to see something updated after a long time away. Thanks.

I'm really enjoying this story it's a great twist on the established plot, I hated halo 5 I hope they bring it together for 6 awesome job.

Good to have you back. I enjoyed the new chapter. Keep up the good work.

Glad to see a new chapter after so long :) Keep up the good work.

Oh yeah, the best Halo fanfic ever is back in the game, baby! Have looked so forward that it'd update sooner or later. I mean, this is the story that Halo 5 SHOULD have been, doing the whole "Master Chief vs. ONI" plot way better than the actual game did. Already excited for the next chapter!

Welcome back, and glad you have the opportunity to continue!

Introduce your current literate kids to the best of Pre-Halo 4 fanfiction.

Hot damn this is an excellent story-it's a shame it hasn't been updated in 8 years, but you've done a fantastic job. Thank you so much for writing this!

Best chapter.

Neat chapter.

Cool chapter.

Good chapter.