I recently finished the book and let me say. Wow. Ur such a good writer. Any constructive criticism hmmm personally I feel like Ginny wouldn’t be so well. How she is. But over all awesome!

Highschool romance do not lasts. I was shocked that Hermione dated moRon for ten years even if she didn't love him.

Dude great story

Well, Ronald didn't deserved to be cheated on, but Ginny certainly does not have moral high ground here. Good story. You write well :-)

So much drama omg but I’m glad it all worked out even if it took a while

Eah

Meh

Bah

Um... its rosé not rosie

You certainly made us wait for this happy ending! I would feel like God hated me if I were Ron though...

That was good, for a story about cheating. I despise cheating but I read the whole thing and it wasn’t badly written... I will say that.

This story is awesome. Well done. It was so moving and emotional. Keep up the good work.

Great ending, perfectly written. Also nothing needs to be re-written, it's perfect the way it is. Only negative thing is the trio is no longer a thing but to stick to Ron's characterisation, he will come around. So no worries, Ron always comes around especially after a huge fit and time alone when it clicks into his head, how wrong he was.

The Ron/Hermione fight was realistic and you've done great to stick to their characters. Besides they probably have had a fight like this in canon. Another reason for H/Hr

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