| Reviews for Jaded |
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Guest chapter 28 . 5/4 aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAa! OMG! |
madmaxborg chapter 7 . 5/21/2019 I know I'm quite late to the party but can't help myself. I enjoyed the story so far but there is thing that is so out of character for Harry as he is depicted in your story that I find myself struggling with reading the rest of it. It's Harry's attitude toward sex and Remus. First for him sex is so important intimate and emotional thing he can't do casual which is fine and it corresponds with his reaction to Remus just go on it with other boy. But then he made 180 and is ok with going out with Remus when he simply says he knew Harry was and is into him so he just went on ignoring him while hes been having purely physical sex all the time with who knows with how many ppl. Such reasoning should make Harry more wary, get angry and insulted would be appropriate reaction, too, as its quite rejection- to know you're into him and he rather fancies you, too( as the invitation suggests) but rather than do something about it he rather does someone else. But suddenly none of Harry's feelings about sex matters anymore and he is ok with giving Remus a go without Remus even mentioning he'll limit his future stress relieving activities. It's so contradictory and fast it makes little to no sense and makes suspension of disbelief or not even relating to but simply following the character really difficult. Also didn't get the note in the book. How is possible for message put into book in 70's to transport itself to 90's? Other than wait next 20yrs that's it. |
Nargelz chapter 7 . 9/25/2018 If they put it in the book wouldn’t that have to wait intill Hermione gets to hogwarts so like 20 years |
Amineh1825 chapter 37 . 8/22/2018 Homosexuality... Earthquake? Lmao! |
Jayden Whitehouse chapter 43 . 5/8/2018 Absolutely loved reading this story. Has to be one of my favourite Marauders story ever read on this site. Recently I have found myself almost obsessed with fanfictions where Harry is sent back in time either accidentally or purposely to the time when the marauders were in Hogwarts and falling in love or dating Sirius or Remus. I just think they are so cute and sometimes the angst is heart-wrenchingly adorable. Though I have to admit this one is the best, plot wise and character representation wise. |
Guest chapter 7 . 3/11/2018 harry is bipolar as fuck. I think he should hate Remus a little more lmao |
AnonymousDelete chapter 43 . 11/22/2017 I've spent the better part of two days reading this story and every few chapters I think to myself, "At this pace, how can there possibly be enough story left to reach FORTY-THREE chapters?!" Amazing. You've crammed so much into this. A thoroughly good read, thank you so much! |
Guest chapter 43 . 9/24/2017 Fun. |
I'm a abandon ca chapter 20 . 6/17/2017 Chrysalis just. This is a good story Fhthshfhdhdh Fhthdhfhdhaj Dobaggjoyjdj quenfhdjsjdkf Popopoopoplo |
MY SIS IS A FART chapter 18 . 6/17/2017 This is a very good story it is one of Mai faves. GO OLD FARTS! |
LittleMeowMoo chapter 1 . 5/14/2017 People can rant at your 'poor' english, personally i saw nothing wrong. I'm more put out you called Harry 'Jaime', its liked you misspelled 'Jamie' and just rolled with it. Jaime is so weird to say ! I'll probably end up just calling him Jamie instead... easier read flow ._. Otherwise, interesting story so far! |
MR. S chapter 43 . 2/26/2017 Jajajajaja a continuar con la secuela! XD Felicitaciónes. |
akeylei chapter 1 . 2/25/2017 I don't know what errors everyone was talking about. This story is great and your English is better than half the native speakers I know! Keep up the good work and keep writing from your heart |
BloodLikeRubies chapter 37 . 10/24/2016 You see I can't handle war after they just got married so I'm just gonna act like dumbledore never walked in and Remus and Harry adopted Johan as their son and lived happily ever after. |
BloodLikeRubies chapter 9 . 10/22/2016 I'm sobbing so much, the feels |