Greetings Little Nanami I Loved Your Story Very Much It Has Such Such Emotion That I Fail To Describe I Was Truly Touched And Shocked By The Age Difference And Their Encounter Together And How Their Feelings Of Love Suddenly Overflow After All Those Years And Distance Between Them Is Closed With An Embrace But You Really Disappointed Had To Force Himself To Shut His Love Feelings From Mitsuki So Pretty Please Hurry Up And Write The 9th Chapter And If You Have Any Free Time I Want To Ask Of You A Favor If You Wish Write Me A FanFiction About Izumi And Meroko So Pretty Please With Sugar On Top Respond To My Request

Wow I really love this story I got tears in my eyes because Takuto had to leave, I see that you haven't updated for awhile but I really hope that you finish this story because it is very good :D

But isn't Takuto 16? Shinigamis don't age so they stay the same age they died. Or be the age of their mental age, lke Izumi.

Ah Eichi! I don't know if that's good or bad but i'm cheering for Mitsuki and Takuto all the way!

oh yeah and this is a great story!

i love your other fullmoon fic as well :)

OOOH! Eichi! I always thought he deserves some chance with Mitsuki...and it's so sad that he had to die...

~Miko

HI Little Nanami! it's me again! i put you on the author alert list so i would know when any of your stories come out because i love them all! I loved this chapter and nice cliffhanger. Can't wait till you update again!

This was a really good chapter. 3
I love your story, it's very interesting. Hope you update soon!

AWw, finally Takuto's thoughts are revealed! Yay!

~Miko

i thought i was a good story and im happy that you updated cause i loved this story when i read it before and i still love it. please update again soon -

Cool chapter i thought it was good i also have a question: did you just take what the people did in the anime/manga and change them around cause its cool like this

Your writing is better than before! And it makes this chapter more interesting!

Actually yesterday i have the same situation as mitsuki's! Haha! What a coincidence! My history teacher is so evil.. XP

I'll wait for your update! Please update soon.. _

Heyt! I got your email, and im sorry its taken me so long to get back to you, but here I am now!

I don't think its the background information that gives this story a feel as if something is missing. I've been thinking about it, and I think maybe its the characterization. It seems that a lot of times things happen with characters without any real explanation as to why they did that, or what their motives were. There certainly are some motives, like Takuto distancing himself from Mitsuki, but small things like Mitsuki suddenly kissing him without any thought beforehand about it and just going in for the kill. Small, simple things like that that give the story some realism to it. I think that is the biggest issue here. Just description in motivation. I mean, not much is really missing from the story other than that small tidbit. You have a good plot, a nice set of characters that come along with decent reasons as to why they are there, and you have good character relationships and reasons as to why they have those relationships. You never miss on grammar or spelling. You've got good vocabulary and your words flow together easily enough. It might just be me though with the thought that there isn't enough motivation. I could be just looking into it too deep, but I hope you sort of understand where I'm coming from. I really like your story so far, so I hope things progress well!

~Miko

It's been a long time since your last update,i looked forward for it!

But your story's still interesting! I like your plot too!

You must write more!

Please update soon!

i thought it was a good chapter and its cool cause it has all the characters from the anime and manga but there not the same age and its cool. sorry i babble on in one sentence lots.

Ahh I don't know. The story seems to be lacking something a bit more in depth. I mean, you have good characterization and plot development, but maybe its the situations that are pulling the characters and the plot along a different route? I'm not sure really. It just feels like something is missing.

~Miko