Update please!

yay that was awsome... please write more soon!

Aww what happened? I would've loved the next chapter, this was interesting and I know I am so late, but GAH! You just left us hanging, well now me since I just now found this story, but this is really good!

:( I will put this story on my alerts just in case you decide to update one day.

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this is getting interesting! i'm wondering how kakashi and kisame are going to react to, more or less, walking in on itachi kissing sasuke.

...how i would love to be in thier places. but -sigh- life is never fair, now is it?

heres a deep meaning Kisame and Kakashi are very cool!

~nellie

Yay! Another chapter! You write very well and I eagerly await the next update.

This story seems to be very good so far.

omg

iam loving this story right now .

Great chapter, please update

Wow. This sounds very promising! I look forward to your next update!

*squeal* Kiss him back kiss him back! omg make out on the table of a prison interview room lmao thats too awesome!

*glares* You and you're friggin words! *sighs* Makes me so mad that I can hate you! LOL just kidding I could never hate a writer as a good as you!_ The first chapter of this was SO GOOD that it inspired me to write a story with a new kind of feel to it. (It's not done yet.)

This chapter was as good as the first one and I can't wait for more!_

(I'm in a hurry so I didn't log in.)

Awesome writing, this looks extremely promising! Can't wait for more! I loved the beginning - the comparison between a spider and a fly and Sasuke and Itachi has always struck me as appropriate...

Love it so far.

nice chapter! I like your writing style and the story sounds promising... so update soon...

...Wow... I love the way you put words together, especially in the beginning when Sasuke was watching the spider and the fly. i have a feeling it forbodes something but I don't know is definitely going in faves and alert list. Keep up the good work.