Pls make another chapter soooon!

Very interesting story.

I can't wait for more!

Jeff might have been a friend of Lily's dad or maybe Lily's brother or something and maybe some bad magical thing happened and he died or something like that

please update soon

this is really good!

this looks like a really good story

My best friend Sarah, a.k.a Rowan Hood of the Rowan wood died last night, we thank you for the joy your stories brought her, she was 14. We could never repay you for the joy you brought her while she was sick.

Really like it, i cant wait for the next chapter! i would love to be a beta or help with the story, that is if u still want help. please e-mail me to let me know if you want help!

This is really good. I hope you update soon.

Byes,

Cc

i have an account called Smile123 but im not signed on right now. but anyways, yeah sure, id love to help BETA, but i cant guarentee that ill get every mistake so u could get another person to BETA too and like, u give it to them first, then i double peer edit. or visa versa. and also, ill help add little stuff, like descriptions or whatever. i mean, obviously u can check it over, but like, idk, just to add stuff.

as for ideas, well, do u have like, any idea for the plot so far?

thanks, loved the chapter! update soon! please!

and please respond.

-courtney

This is nice...

that's better. last chapter was just really confusing. just try proof reading more carefully, you've got a bunch of little mistakes- sorry, it's one of my pet peeves.

can you just choose one version, it's making the story really confusing. the thing you did in the first chapter were good, but the second chapter was confusing and you left things out and it was just plain unnecessary.

*punches Sirius in the Face* Sirius is an idiot...i am mad at him now... very intersting storyline... very interesting

Great chapter!

Hope Lily's OK.

UPDATE SOON