Now this was too cute. Proposing to her on a roller coaster? Amazing! Totally Gil Grissom. And the last line? Perfection. Absolutely loved this, you have an amazing talent. It was fantastic!

I thought things were going to get nasty there with Grissom and Robert for a moment. Glad to see my Geeks get what they deserve; each other :)

Finally, you guys! Loved the bit about 'what I it was me under that car' it was ingenious. Really amazing chapter. And a great ending ;) they are just so hot.

I knew dear old Robert was going to mess up somehow eventually. It was only a matter of time.
Perfect timing for these guys. Really liked this chapter, great work :)

I love how you include quotes from them into this, it fits really well. And I love how Charlotte and Avery are now concerned, yet matchmaking. And, I loved the last scene. I love this, okay?

Haha, loved it. That's my Sara. Great scene. Would love to see more of Avery vs Sara. (Reminds me of Lady Heather and Sara, really) loving this so far.

Ooh, sneaky Cath.. Wonder how that will play out. Nice to see the Sara and Greg friendship. Interested to see the rest!

Pfft, I hope she doesn't go back. Or, if she does, it's with Grissom. Great work :)

I can actually imagine all of this happening. It isn't some crazy AU that could never work. I loved this chapter :)

This was amazing. Totally loved it. You're doing a fantastic job.

Capturing the characters very well in this chapter :) loved Cath finding the spider, I can imagine her face! Can't wait to see the meeting.

Great first chapter, really got me interested. I loved the two sides :)

Fabulous story. I can see that you put some serious thought and time into it, which did not go to waste at all, because the twists and turn of events of this story are outstanding to say the least. This fic was not like any of the countless others I've read before. Keep up the good work :D

Absolutely loved this! The characterization was amazing and I loved the OC's too.

One nice thing is coming back to reread and enjoy a great story. I enjoyed this as much today as when you first wrote it. I love how you have taken canon and rearranged the whole thing but it all comes back to Grissom and Sara together.