this was good i dont know why people were bagging your other story. Im currently writing a snatch fanfic aswell. I plan on making it a multi chapter but im struggling with the plot, is there any chance you could help?

Aha i love this :D I think it would be cool if you could a bit of a fic to it rather than just a one shot :D but i spose i wouldnt do that for just one person..

Anyway, i really like it.

Aw I like it! esp. the first bit! "Well, let me enlighten you, old habits die hard, and Tommy still tends to speak out of turn in the presence of dangerous people" I could just hear Turkish saying that. Awesome.