I found this story while digging around and... wow. I read it once, stopped, and went back to make myself take time and go slowly, savoring every bit. And then I read it again as soon as I finished. I see elements of all my favorite books and movies in there, which I suppose explains why I like it, but it also just feels good. Wholesome. I feel really good after reading it, something I haven't felt in a while; I even feel like being responsible and taking care of some tasks that I've been putting off. I haven't finished SG:Atlantis yet- in Season 4 currently- but when I went to watch an episode last night, I had to keep reminding myself that the Sheppard in SGA doesn't have a multi-world kingdom in the Pegasus galaxy. It just feels empty without the world that you've built. I suppose I'll have to watch the rest of Season 4 and 5 while telling myself that he's just hanging out with the Atlantis team in between his kingly duties. Anyway, thanks for a fantastic journey! I can't wait to read the second and third stories, although I note with some concern that the last update to the third story was posted over a year ago. I know life is crazy right now- here's hoping that you find a chance to finish!

Unusual tale but very enjoyable.

I enjoyed this fic again. Thank you!

Beautiful story! You wrote this so well! Loved every second of it!

I loved this chapter! Great job maintaining their characters so far! Such a great read!

Wow this was just amazing not what I expected at all. Loved the fact that there were references to all of my favorite sci fi stories, Lord of The Rings, Ladyhawk, Star Wars, Indiana Jones and of course the Stargate Universe. I have not read the sequels yet but what an amazing movie this would have made The characters were perfect I felt like I was watching the show the whole time I was reading. Great job!

Loved this story and the reasoning for Sheppard's gene strength...definitely leaves an opening for more adventures or should I say misadventures...onward Sancho

I kinda like dress blues myself...

Great story. A lot of fun and I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Awesome, really great story. Characters are well done. Very enjoyable to read. Thanks.

Really enjoyed this story, looking forward to reading the sequels.

I just wanted to say I love you and what the heck are you doing writing fan fiction, let me know when you publish your first book :) I've read most of this fan fiction and the only reason I haven't read the whole thing is because it's pretty long, though don't worry I plan to finish it one day. I love you're writing so much I actually have been rereading the parts of the story I've already read. You are amazing and extremely creative, I literally have no idea how you come up with some of the concepts and characters in your writing. Once again I'm your number one fan...but not in a creepy way.

This was a very awesome story. I loved it.

Awesome story I loved it.
It's a jewel !

Words cannot express how much I loved your story & it' s 2 sequels. Haven't read anything of its kind to compare. It was an absorbing and exciting read. I am so glad that I came upon it after they had all 3 been written so I did not have to wait! This unique take on John Sheppard's destiny is one I will read again & again. (I already have). I hope one day there will be more. Thank you so much for the reading pleasure.