Hi, I'm sorry, but I had to stop reading this. You made Kagome a Mary Sue and freaking cringeworthy. I had to stop.

I am confused about the idea that a female can die if she doesn't mate because her heat can kill her or that a royal inu must mate who they rut. Yoshino is obviously a royal inu of mating age who has rut with many different males. Did she have a mating age presentation also and how does her family not know or smell all the males she has been with?

When you got an itch to scratch with this awesome story... You reread it againpossibly for the 4th time...?)

Thank you Author for sharing your story...The plot is good so entertaining and a nice sequel, though I laughed every time kagome fainted I think she have that every chapter... hahaha

Anyway I’m a fan of kagome and Sesshomaru’s pairing so I love this one... I’m just wondering what happened to Inuyasha at the end of story...

Looking forward for more shessy kags story... good luck

What a wonderful imagination you have there.

Great start to your story.

I loved this story. please do more like it

Dear cindygirl,
This story has to be one of my favourites!
I've read, and reread it several times over the years and, it never gets old for me ;)
Thanks for writing and sharing your Awesome stories,
Sincerely Frog

I come back to this story, time and time again, rereading it so many times I have lost track. And each time I am just as enthralled with your writing as I was the first time I read it. Thank you so much for the story, it will continue to be a wonderful read no matter how many times I read it.

I really Luke this story but first the kagome character and insecurity was ok but Intel this Point its completly frustrating
Its understantable but then change and its frustrating and if she continue better of she have to light for sesshomaru
But, anyway i Will continue reading this story,
I love IT and sorry about the bad grammar but my cellphone change all the Words, u know

mix feelings... good story. I liked it...for the most part. spelling and grammar issues aside, not even mentioning them, it was a bit much. Kegome would be all powerful and then crumble and cry. I understand that her character was fragile and grew up hard, but she didnt seem fragile and powerful, she seemed more psychotic and bi-polar. And after over 1000 years, you would think that she would have grown and become confident in herself, her life, and power. instead she is still crying about someone saying something and questions how a HUMAN 25 year old could be 1000 instead and mated to Sesshomaru when they haven't seen her at all in all these years. I dont understand how her character never grew up, emotionally, since physically is obvious and obviously not what I'm talking about. this story is really good. I really liked it. that's why I read the whole thing all the way to the end. I just dont like your Kegome. she just seems to be all over the place.

You're stories are great! You made kagome have a demon and more like an angel. Keep your great works to continue as this is my favorite fanfic. Also for 'Guest' in the comment,don't judge if you can't prove anything and just judge like other hypocrites. Wonder if bashing is just what you spout unless its also your shit being retarted. I notice every fanfic that you bash the fanfic so if you can't stop then shut the fucking hell,this is why judgementals are retarded as to resort to poor excuse messages.

inutaisho one day ur mate will kick u so hard tha u never sit again in ur life

Why didn't you continue with this story because I want to know to the fith baby

Ah Cindy thank you so much for uploading it again I was so disappointed when it won’t open but I am glad that it does now .believe it it’s one of my top 10 most fav fictions and I read it way to many times that I have memorised almost half of the dialogues hehehe well once again thanks for reuploading it again