i really like this story but i miss chapter 13 please repost it

Yah! Another Ion and Seth fanfic! I love this couple! I'll enjoy reading this. Keep updating!

I like it.

~hand over mouth~ OMG! No, don't kill Seff! ((I meant Seth, and you know it.))

I thing you should do both of them, just make sure you let people know that their the same idea, just a little bit differant plot. :P if that makes any sence...anyway! I love both of them! so, dont give up, kay? I cant wait to get more, for both of them, keep up the awsome work!

~crusnik~

I, personally, would like to see more of both this story and caged passions.

I think i need to see another chappie before deciding..

So far though i think this is a better start...

Hmm well i'd say keep them both.

I really want to see what happens with the original but this one sounds really great too so far.

If it came down to one or the other though I'd have to say this new one has me more intrigued about what is going to happen next.

Here ya go...I dont feel like reviewing, cause I already told ya what I though on YIM...and I'm sure you dont want me to say that on here...I know I dont want to...anyway! awsome story, I love! I love! :D

cya!

~crusnik~

I would say that stupid thing that made her obey that one dude. The thing that made her call one of her nobles Master. Oii, I can't spell today so I'm stuck with my simple words.

Hiya! :D

Thats no fair...I wanna guess to! can I at least give them a hint? No? Aww...you suck... (JK! sheesh...dont take it so personally, it was just a joke...)

OMG! You should have had Seth say to Ion just before she passed out, "B-big brother..." ! That would have made Ion SO confused! shes gonna have to tell him eventually...right? She cant really hide the fact that she has a family from the man she loves...can she? like Chigaru already knew about Abel and Cain, heck! he even knew Lilith!Personally! *knows WAY to much for her own good* Though Abel never let him near Seth...untill Abel was out of the picture that is (dont worrie people! he didnt die, he just sat on his ass mournin over a dead body for 900 years, give or take a few decades) sereously people! if you didnt know that, you should defintally go and read WinterShadows other storys! *Meta* (thats the short verson of the title...XD just go her profile, shes an AWSOME...opsie...uhh...FAR-OUT! writer (I say awsome to much, so she made me find a new word...XD :P)

I think I'll let you go now since this is nothing but gibberish, but VERY TRUE gibberish...we clear on that? yes? good.

~crusnik~

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A SLAVE! NO! POOR SETH! OMG, you HAVE to update this WS!(WinterShadow) ~ PLZ!

W00T W00T! I cant wait for the update *randomly dances around in circles* WE!

Ok...umm...I guess...I'll...you know...let you go now...so...uhh...BYE!

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~crusnik~

O.o OH MY GOOD LORD! THERE GOING TO SELL HER! ACK! poor Seth!

If only Abel knew what was going on...then he'd kill that basterd before he could even scream! XD

Sorry...I'm not very hyper right now...My mom took ALL my candy away...even my SECRET stash! I cant belive she found it...Oh well...just have to make a new one!

And thanks for the updates! I know I said I wasent goignt to be able to go on the computer untill monday, but...lets just say my brothers off having fun *wink wink* So I get the computer! yay! I still can't update yet, im still working on the rough draft of the story, Oh ya, and whats your Yahoo? I finally got Yahoo messenger downloaded

going to go read teh other chapter now! Bye Bye!

~crusnik~

aw I love the way you portray Ion_ he sounds so sweet. I'd prefer Ion with Seth rather than Esther. I don't know why but I just do. I really appreciate at how fast you update it makes my day!