i think you made a mistake here since Lita is married to Nephrite not Malachite. Pretty sure Malachite and Kunzite is pretty much the same person with different names because of the different versions of Sailor Moon. Overall, this was a great story to read :D

By far one of the best stories I have read! Altough I would have loved to see more about the weddings and after the war but its Ok.. I enjoyed it :) hope to see another

Good story but your grammar and spelling are horrible. You need to edit every chapter. Also in the last chapter you mess up the names calling nephrite malakite. Your story is a bit rushed at parts too but it us understandable. You really need to work in yohr spelling and grammar.

This grammar of yours is confusing.

Loved this, loved this, loved this! Best Silver Millennium fan fiction I've read. Just only sorry that it had to end! :-(

Just finished story and loved the ending.

Oh man, I don't know where to begin. It's such a generic story with the typical Harlequin story elements and characters. If you changed the names, the characters would be unrecognisable beyond recognition. It's okay if that's your headcanon but the problem is that your story is just like sooo many others. Without the names nothing would suggest that this is a Sailor Moon story; instead it could be placed into any other fandom. You have supposedly "fiery" women (not only Serena but also Lita and Rei) but who are just so easily swooned by their overly dominant male counterparts. And, of course, Serena inexplicably falls in love with Darien even though he is borderline abusive and disrespectful towards women. I know he will be redeemed and fall madly in love with her but it's not a very satisfying story for me. I hope you'll come up with better characterisation and storylines because your grammar and spelling is good.

This story was so funny I loved it. I enjoyed dariens pig headedness and how he denied he loved her. And finally admitted it when he felt threatened by seiya. And then Serena turning into a seductive tease was hilarious. I can't wait the read the rest of your work.

Horrible writing.

This is my second time reading this fic and I've enjoyed it just as much as the first time I read it.

this is HOT

that was awesome! though i kinda expected a little epilogue into the twentieth century where seiya ends up part man, part woman, and i kinda expected rini to be born and meet helios/pegasus! it was still totally awesome of course :)

make a sequel

love it

This story was awesome, amazing, and it had a beautiful ending!