AUGH! How the hell did I never finish this?! o.O Well, gonna remedy that now. On to part 2!

(Kesh sends his love :-*)

Love the story so far!

Great finale!

Loa, that was... HAH! Normally I don't review a story till I reach the most recent chapter, but that... I had to say something about that. I can't help but wonder what kind of shitstorm might follow on its heels, though...

Aww! I feel so terrible for Inali. :[

THIS STORY IS AMAZING! IT WAS HARD TO STOP AND REVIEW BECAUSE I WANTED TO KEEP READING.

WOO EPIC STORY!

WTH! Why can't a single story on this freaking site not be slash! For gods sakes the freaking thing wasn't even labeled that! You have forever managed to scar my perception of Warcraft fanfics. Please for the love of god label this thing as slash in the summary.

Dahahahaa! Much as I adore Jyota, that was epic :3 And it's my totally informed opinion that everything is better with a bit of Vol'jin in it.

This whole chapter is just brimming with pure excitement, and it's so contagious, makes me grin like a loon because Enoki is so happy to be running off with Zynn. Wonderful descriptions and mrr bringing that about. And that "thanks for everything" afterthought scrawl was just adorable.

What a great end to an introduction! Ah man, the confrontation with Jyota had be laughing and flailing on the bed (sorry JyoJyo). How awful for poor Jyota, but he still got what he deserved and that bit was HILARIOUS. Loved the last paragraphs too. I really can't wait to see what you've got up your sleeve for the continuation of this story. Looking forward to it! 3

Once again, your language and use of it really is the most gratifying thing about reading your stories. What would usually be seen as superfluous details, like the descriptions of the armor shop and its goods, did well as metaphors for Enoki's burning desire to be free and foreshadowing for what we are certainly going to see in future installments.

Oh. And also. *FANGIRL SQUEE* AMG RAHJ! E 3

Ahem. Lovely work, as always, bebe! 3

Mwaah :3 Such a wonderful chapter, lots of beautiful descriptions and Enoki starting off mopey but getting all fired up towards the end is the sweetest thing ever. And those little hints of things to come are absolutely delishioos. You know where I bounced on my seat in glee _

WOOT! Enoki is making his way in the world at last. the army really isn;t a good place for a shaman. too rigid. its good to see that he's finally able to wander like he's meant to, great job! :)

An update! Zomg! Totally worth it, not boring!

Love it as per usual, can't wait for the next bits :D

Ack! I totally forgot about this, and decided to check it after I updated my own fanfic to chapter 12. So glad to see a new chapter, especially one about such a glorious new beginning. Perfect start to the new year. :]

yay! adventure time! don't worry about the time between updates, i'm just happy to see this waiting for me after an obnoxiously long day at work. great job as always, i love your work.