| Reviews for My Fairytale Ending |
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  Guest chapter 11 . 7/17/2019 I think it jumped from first to third person at the end there? Great story but sometimes I get a little lost |
| Sneha chapter 1 . 1/9/2019 I loved it. It's amazing. Edward is someone famous and Mike is Bella:s Boyfriend. Wow , that's something new |
 BPB4 chapter 30 . 11/29/2017 I feel like you are rushing everything and I started to get confused as I keep on reading furthur and furthur but overall it will be a great story if you actually explain everything more clearly. However , its a good story so keep up! |
| tressrylla rose chapter 1 . 5/3/2017 Good storyline |
| tressrylla rose chapter 1 . 5/3/2017 Good storyline |
| jk chapter 4 . 2/21/2017 this reads so wrong...like it was written by a child...its annoying and the grammar is horrible...I just cant read anymore |
| jk chapter 2 . 2/21/2017 soooo bella just assumed that Edward had her address to mail the book back? and isn't it funny how shes acting like a fucking pathetic fan girl but she was all calm and collected while meeting him...not even paying attention but reading her little book. Why is she acting like a 13 year old now? |
| jk chapter 1 . 2/21/2017 EACH famous woman has already tried to date him? really? EVERY famous female? really? watch your wording or you'll come off like an idiot. If Edward has done 12 movies along with everything else...lets see...each movie is like a MINIMUM of 3 months shooting...so its been AT LEAST 3 years hes been famous...and he hasn't dated ANYONE? Yaaaaa I don't believe that for a fucking second. You would have us believe that doctors from back stage came on to help the body guards and INJECTED the attacker with something...does that sound remotely legal to you? Like they would do that in front of an entire audience of people? That there wouldn't be legal ramifications for drugging someone? |
| bloody marry chapter 12 . 1/26/2016 25 years old |
| sv chapter 30 . 7/3/2015 even though u were 13 (shocked to read that ) ..u wrote quite a good story and weaved the characters well enough for a 13 yr old and didnt put in the usual crazy things most people do...keep up the good work! |
| Akshaya chapter 30 . 6/19/2015 It was awesome |
| deadliness chapter 30 . 4/13/2015 beautiful writing |
| deadliness chapter 12 . 4/13/2015 maybe 15, judging by how we;ll you write and some spelling mistakes, but otherwise you write like a professional |
| deadliness chapter 8 . 4/13/2015 wow, cool writing |
| deadliness chapter 1 . 4/13/2015 nice, but why mike! not that i dont like him but what about bob |
