Wow. Thays all i can say because you took all the better words and made the greatest narusaku lemon ive read. You have talent. Write more narusaku please i would hate for narusaku to be without a writer such as yourself. Great job

Eek ;)

Very Sweet!112222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222222!

This was very good and really cute (:

This lemon is one of best i've read.

You showed how both of them loved each other on all levels, physically, mentally, emotionally, etc.

I'm glad you didn't use the usual, today's society of vulgar slang and instead showed two people who made love to each other.

Good job.

I thought it was good, especially for a first time lemon! lol yeah i always worry about people's reactions to the lemons i write but it always reassures and encourages me at the good resposes ive recieved so far! And im sure you're recieving a good response to this one so write more! lol :)

i must say

this lemon was very very beautiful

you did an excellent job on this

Incredible writing. For a first time lemon you managed to incorporate a story about people making love. Not sex. Intimacy at its finest.

that and you made me have to clean my computer screen after it steamed up.

*cheers*

This is your first? Its awesome! *lovesit*

I really liked this :]]

Great job!

Not a bad lemon...This is your 1st one after all.

Awesome. Truly awesome for a first time. I couldn't have done any better myself. Actually, you might have even done BETTER than me! hehe! Anyway, loved it! Thanxs! :) :p ;)

Nice ain't the word - this is GREAT. You put quite a bit of thought into this and it shows through. Again, great job on it.

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its good

I know lemons, and that was very good for a first time. You have a really good talent for this huh? Hope to see more of your work, and can't wait for the update on SE.