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Wow! I am truly hot inside after reading this.. It's incredible to me to be able to actually enjoy the relationship all of us dream of ourselves and the hotness which goes with it. I have to say I haven't been blown away by a writing work in awhile, but this is the exception though I think if you had slowed down in some places, you could easily get this published. It's one of the best He-man/She-Ra fanfictions I've read in a long time.

Thanks for warming my heart and "other" parts of the body 3

I'm going to flat out say, Adora and Adam as brother and sister make this very weird, but when you put them from different families not related.. Holy fuck, this was some really hot erotic sex.. I wish I was in Adam's plac 3

You're a talented writer and subjectively this is a good story but do you REALLY need to badmouth Glimmer? She's my favourite character.

It was a dream..an Erotic Dream.. it's More than I could have hoped for them.

I wish you could see my glowing face now. my smile is so wide that it almost cut out.
I thank you so much for this Fic. Almost twenty years after I sow the show my heart wish come true.
Thank you again.

When I watch the movie twenty years ago I wonder how it could be if Adam and adura will be as lovers. You made it come true and I'm so glad.

Wow... that was so romantic and sensual I was ready to melt.

That's just wonderful episode.

I wrapped a sense of deja vu.
And the little details you studying and changing are very welcome .

This story could have been the reboot version of She-Ra after the reboot of He-Man.

This is a beautiful story and I wish to thank you for posting it. I was absolutely transfixed by the descriptions and dialogue. Everyone was in character and very believable. Kudos on such a wonderful story. :)

I love chapter 1 The Beginning it was great.

Do you have any idea...any IDEA at all that you've transported me back to my childhood after reading the lines from the movie in this chapter? I watched this movie SO much when I was a kid, I had the script memorized.

Okay...ramble over. I have to read more. Must read more. I'll review more in a bit when I'm over my nostalgia-fit.

Yeesh, I'm so excited to see how you are going to change this. Back to it...

I love the bit of Eternian culture (“only men who could do nothing else were designated as cooks”) and a hint that Mothers blending into Eternian culture may not have been entirely smooth. Not that social justice was a topic the series avoided (far from it) they just never used this particular one. On one hand cooking could help distinguish Adam from He-Man, whom no one would expect such a thing. Of course in the original series (as opposed to the ‘others’) Adam was still capable, especially diplomatically and intellectually, so there was indeed stereotype breaking here. Good job. I wish you had used a word other than “crèche”, apparently it is French for day care. I am pretty sure you meant “class” or “caste” but it was a stumbling point.

Good recap of the first few minutes of the movie! I’ve always thought that Adam must really like being on Etheria. No one had any expectations of him, he can be himself. I’ve also wondered if people even realized he was a prince (prior to the Christmas Special, that is.)

Great story! Excellent points. I loved searching for the slight differences you blended in (this point applies to ALL chapters). Thank you for sharing.