Reviews for Captured
0PFex chapter 1 . 9/1/2018
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Sizzin chapter 2 . 5/27/2014
Oh, man. It's a pity that it doesn't have anymore chapters. I really liked the setting and the characters. This story was really well done.
BrownEyedHoneybadger chapter 2 . 12/10/2008
Ha! Man, i love this story! Especially Deedlit with her bad-ass attitude! You must finish it! This is a fanatastic plot! Hoping to read more...
Invader Alia chapter 2 . 7/31/2008
This story is great! I love the plot and your original characters! Please update soon!
Darth Deedlit chapter 2 . 5/18/2008
I'm so glad you updated. I like where this story is going. Keep 'em comming!
Life Is a Curse chapter 2 . 4/6/2008
Please continue this story its has a good plot and I like your style of writing.

please continue
TinyThug chapter 1 . 3/10/2008
please continue this story

its cute so far

i love parn and deedlit

they are cute
Beaufortninja chapter 1 . 11/9/2007
interesting concept. Update soon!
Darth Deedlit chapter 1 . 10/10/2007
Loved it, please continue!

Have fun writing it, and good luck!

KIXES!
munyo chapter 1 . 10/8/2007
Hi! Please please Do NOT stop! I really really would like to read the story! I love Deed/Parn stories and there aren't a lot... :( So please! :)