this was an amazing story i loved it

No offence but this plot is terrible. First Jason gets killed. Then Olivia gets shot and as soon and she's out of the hospital Elliot get shot this is dreadful.

this was a good story

I bet Dean shot his father or he father shot Dean!

Stupid

AWESOME!Benson/Stabler Foreverrrrrrrr...

It's so herd not to cry while reading this! I feel so bad for El! And liv of course! I'm going to read chapters 5-10 tommorw and review again! (its 4am, so I need some sleep, otherwise, I'd keep reading till I was finished!) chapters 1-5 were very good! Just so sad! I almost cried a few times for El/Liv! So sad, but so good!

I just found this! It's so good! I'm do scared for Liv! I hope el can save her!

K so i'm like really enjoying reading your great writting and it's the second chapter :P lol keep up the awesome stories :) btw i like almost cried... and I'm not one to cry especially reading a story.

Awww, I was sad to read about Dean being the bad guy and so hurtful to Liv. I know this is a fanfiction site so authors are free to write how they see fit but I wish there were more stories about Olivia and Dean. Guess us O/D shippers we'll have to wait for the SVU writters to give us what we have been longing for.

Hi, just got done with this! Great job! Especially like the BIIM songs! LOVE BIIM!

This is really good i really cried during the end...thank god i took my make-up off before i did :D keep up the good work on other storys!

Love, it love it, love it

This is getting harder and harder to read...I want to read the sequel, but I can't until I finish this lol )

I still like it though. )

lol I love when Bobby is like "Down girl." lol