interesting and deep and sad and wow

Whoo! I love it! Especially the later chapters with more detail. George's made me want to cry, though I figured Snape's boggart would be shampoo or something if it was a crackfic!

I enjoyed reading this because it was an interesting new side of Lavender which I'd never really thought about! Also it's nice to read about a cowardly Gryffindor after travelling through the books with Harry, Ron and Hermione...haha. Lovely :)

wow...

i kinda haven't reviewed any stories for the entire month of february(i know karma will totally make me break my leg or something) due to the crazy amounts of hw teachers just LOVE to give us after midterms

any way enough complaining about my life

my point is, when i opened this update, i in all honesty had no intention of leaving a review today(its 7: 44 and i am not done w/ my hw! :O)

but as usual, you blew me away, as usual (i know what a cliche)

but its true

due to being a hard core hermionie fan, i more or less have completely despised lavender throughout the entire series

however, i love anti heroes

and this chapter made me realize what an anti hero lavender really is, i mean a "superfacial gryffindor"-i absolutely loved that wording :D

okay, so absolutely brilliant potrayal of lavander-i will never see her the same way again

and absolutely amazing chapter ;d

update when u can

-bookwormandpoet

PS. I just realized(a little bit too late) what horrible grammar structure this review is in and how hard it must be to read-sorry!(i am kinda in a rush))

:D

ahh Neville. Wouldn't it have been interesting if he had been The One instead of Harry? How different would the books have been I wonder...(By the way this was very good haha I forgot what the point of a review was for a moment there!)

more now

what is mad eyes fear answer via email

She updated!(*pumps fists in air and jumps up excitedly,only to sit down and read the actual chapter*)

anyway, enough of my randomness...)

So awesome chapter, i LOVED your Neville (well, I really love Neville in any way shape or form but I digress)

I liked how realistic you were about Neville-its true even though Neville has his "moments", he doesn't really grow up until after Dumbledore dies

I mean, I really don't think the war seemed real to most of the secondary characters(in other words characters other than Ron, Hermionie and Harry)until the 7th book- even the ones who helped Harry in the 5th book-cuz its true, none of them really knew Sirius that well other than the Golden Trio

LOVE this line:

He, Ginny and Luna made as much noise as possible now, because the silence of Harry, Ron and Hermione’s absence was too loud.

And this:

But he’d do it anyway.

(I don't know how or why but you seem to be perfect at ending your chapters-like you find the most effective and awesome last line ever...)

My only complaint(cuz I am annoying) is the few grammar errors:

For example,

1. But, he was a true Gryffindor. (I am not sure the comma is necessary)

had smiled and told him not to worry and that she was sorry as well for leaving him like that but they had all done what they thought was best, hadn’t they, he should really stop thinking like he had done something wrong, it had earned them the House Cup, and poor Slytherins, having their victory taken from them so abruptly, but still we won, didn’t we, and it was all thanks to him.(theres nothing really wrong w/ this sentence-just that it is a run on)

first year Lions, third year Ravenclaws, the Hufflepuffs that needed their help (I just think the that is unecessary...)

4. And Neville knew all too well what the Carrows or Snape would do to him if he was caught, and the first or second or third year knew it too, and Neville grabbed his or her arm, and took the younger student back to the dormitory with instructions on what to say if one of the less nice Professors asked why he or she wasn’t still chained to a wall, and he felt scared to death, when he snuck back into bed (the last and is unnecessary)

then it would get even worse, because he couldn’t just stop rescue the kids, could he? ( I think you meant rescuing?)

Just a few suggestions.

But honestly, the way you can write in a language that is not your native language is amazing in itself (I can't even speak another language-let alone write in another language!)

Okay so that's the end of another ridiculously long review...

Update when ever you can! (you better not put it on hiatus again...)

So yeah, could you do Luna next? (any HP character is fine by me though...)

Great work again!

-bookwormandpoet

PS. What are you talking about, thank bookwormandpoet?

It was all you! :D

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wow...that wuz amazing!

you are an incredibly talented aurthor!

all of the one shots were great...i especially loved the malfoy one and the mad eye one

you are one of the few characters who can allow the hp characters to remain ic(in character) while still eloquently conveying a meaning

fantastic job!

i do wish that you mentioned lilly in snape's one but oh well...

this story definetly(did i spell that wrong?) deserves more reviews...one the spelling topic(since i noticed u ususally ask about spelling errors in ur a/ns...u spelled dying wrong(u said dieing) in the earlier chapters...i did not notice any errors in the later chapters

So anyway, like i said u are a really good aurthor, (and i understand that u have a life and all) but i really do wish u would write more!

plz, plz (image maybe 20 more plzs0 update soon!

i would love it if u did ron or lilly next!

(did i mention that the george one almost made me cry?(lol random i know-i just never really got over freds death in dh))

update ASAP (again, sorry i can be annoyingly persistent)

:D

-bookwormandpoet

;d

PS sorry for the review- its probably longer than one of ur stories-lol!

PPS i just realized by apologizing for the longness(is that a word?) of the review, i made it longer-kay i am rambling, i'll stop now

Interesting

Will you do Luna?

Putting this on alerts!

Glocalnet?

Great chapter!

Yeah, I agree, it wouldn't have been! You could have made McGonagall announcing that Harry and Ron were dead or something, just so she being there would make sense.

I could definitly see James claustophibic!