So far i love it keep up the good work :3

You are an excellent writer. Thank you for this heartbreaking, but also heartwarming story. This, and its prequel, are being added to my favorites. But first, I'm also going to read "Here Without You" and "Never Gone".

Our poor Senshi... I truly hope things eventually come good for them, but this is also the first time that I've really loved a tragic romance story. You're exploring their different relationships and the canon past beautifully. It was really interesting to read about the creation of the 9 planetary kingdoms and I appreciate the explanation of the different generals' powers and how the scouts were tricked by imposters or controlled versions of their loved ones.

Aww that was so bittersweet. Please tell me there's eventually a happy ending? Please?

Also, just curious, did you mean to have the whole chapter formatted to be centered like that?

I feel sorry for Venus. Though, I'm slightly confused. So, before she got her memories back, did she think Malachite (Kunzite's brother?) was Kunzite for some reason?

I feel for Jupiter so much after reading this chapter. You wrote her emotions beautifully. She's powerful, but also just as much the romantic as Venus - if not more so. I always wished they'd explored the senshi's romance more in the canon, so I really appreciate this. May I just ask, why Diana? It suits her, but I'm surprised that it's a Moon-based name, not a Jupiter-based name.

Dang this was good. On to the next one!

god..i actually cried a bit there ;A; at the end i just...that last line-
"He would would grow stronger. And one day, he swore, he would bring them back" THAT LEFT ME WANTING A SEQUEL DAMN IT! *cries a lot* MAMORU YOU TRAIN & GET STRONGER FASTER YOU LITTLE BRAT! NOW PREPARE FOR THE TRAINING OF A 10000 LIFETIMES! ITS NOT FAIR! NOT FAIR! WHY IS THERE LOVE SO TRAGIC? I NEED HAPPY ENDING! I NEED MY FAVORITE GENERALS BAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAACK! TTOTT
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..okay break down covered..yepp..right! *drys tears away* This story..i love it. its very emotional..it brings out my long lived feels.. its good..its bad..ah torture to my heart but i loved it! its great! nice settings, nice storytelling! so in character..i loved..loved..*tears up again*
to emotional to continue but EPIC JOB DEAR! *glomps*

I loved the details and personalities of the Senshi & Shittenou here. Thanks for the wonderful story!

omggggg so angsty and so amazing! I loved it :)

-Strawberry

I like how each chapter told a different love story. You were very creative with them. But I wonder why you made Nephrite blind. Also, why does Artemis hate Kunzite so much? I feel like I come across this concept often in the fandom.

Anyway, great job!

I kind of lost the continuity with the other stories for reading too slowly, and now I'm just very sad... *sob* Glad there's another story connected with these, will have to check it out, too. Sound like it could make me feel better.
Just saying for now that I love the character traits and backgrounds you've given them all.

Hmm, I think I read this before, but didn't review.

I really wanted to commend you for bringing such a fresh idea. Kunzite having a clone (Malachite), Tanzanite having Zoicite as a sister, Nephrite being blind, Jadeite being a...Keeper of the Flame.

You really captured the Senshis' emotions heartbreakingly beautifully. All that anger and sadness and heartbreak...simply beautiful.

I also loved the use of "true names", as many other pieces of literature use such a motif as well, and as we have all seen, a name is a powerful thing.

Amazing job with this!

So good! Best Sailor Moon fic I've read in a while. Write on!

Oh my freaking GOD! Can I just say AMAZING? I can't put into words just how freaking amazing this story is. I really look forward to your future work. Again, FREAKING AMAZING!