Hammergeile Story! Ich hab geheult am Schluss weil ich froh war, dass alles gut ausging. Wow!

I'm not sure if you still read these reviews. But absolutely amazing. You had me reading this till 6 am in the morning. I couldn't put my phone down. I almost wonder why this did not get published as a book. It was so well done. It had everything I could want.. you are so talented and I am so glad that I was able to find this to read it. Thank you so much for this wonderful art u wrote

Americus haha i love that

Beautiful. The story felt like riding a very long roller coaster with many ups and downs.

When Wolfram ran after Yuri once he remembered Esmauralds advice The Truth Untold from BTS came to mind. Now im crying cause i can feel Wolframs feelings really strong within me.

10 years and Yuuri still behaves like an immature teenager. I mean he's a king that still gets bossed around by Gwendel. WTH is that about? I think if Yuuri's behavior reflected that of a grown man who stands in his own power as a king then this story would have more depth. Reading this and all that keeps running through my head is that these people are all children pretending to be adults. There is no maturity, no true growth. They are stunted adolescents and it cheapens the story as well as KKM. You do not do these characters justice, especially Yuuri's character.

Every time I read this story I find myself laughing consistently at Melinda saying having sex with Yuuri on their wedding night was the worst "two minutes" of her life. I think it's hilarious that she thinks he's a horrible lover. I'm sure it has something to do with the fact that she's not his soulmate but I still laugh my ass off at her description.

I cannot believe that 10 years have passed and Yuuri STILL has the maturity of a 16-year-old. He has not grown into his kingship or powers in the least. Why did you write him in such a childish way? He's a grown man of 28 and he still behaves like a teenager. That's pathetic, sad and completely unattractive. Also, why is Yuu a borderline sociopath? Who writes a child in such a sadistic way? Another thing, DEMONS age slower than humans. Yuu would be the equivalent of a 2-year-old after ten years.

I was seriously not expecting Conrad to be the sub sksksksks

WHAT! GUNTER AND GWENDAL?! HONEY YES!

I love this book

yuuram

wow did not expect the end lol,but I take it Reginald will be the next king after yuuri instead of yuu

I really enjoyed the story, the ages of the children got a little werid at times and there were a few other oddities in the story thathad me scratching my head but didn't really take away from the story. I'm always a fan of Mpreg so thank you for that, and thank you for writing.

loved this stiry. had me on the edge of my seat.